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Review of chapter "twelve" from Zaion
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This is amazing wiht a capital A and a capital Z (I don't know where the remaining five capital letters went, maybe the God of Fluffy Hair can find them?). I hope more bits will end up cropping up for this someday.
Review By [Zaion] • Date [19 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "twelve" from deamon
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so was it hel? thats the only thors niece i know lol
Review By [deamon] • Date [1 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "twelve" from Runewolf
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Very amusing. Brightened the end of a dark week. Thanks!
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "twelve" from musumenosuoh
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cackles oh that's awesome! so can't wait for more!!!
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "twelve" from ophite
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I really enjoyed this series. I hope your bunny has many more spawn!
Review By [ophite] • Date [26 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "eleven" from ReferenceGoddess
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Funny! Snappy dialog! Xander sics Andrew on Thor (never let it be said that Xander can't play hardball when the occasion warrants it) Here's to hoping you muse continues to inspire you.
Review By [ReferenceGoddess] • Date [10 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "twelve" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Details! I want more details! Please?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "twelve" from AnFan
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I like this a lot. Very funny.

You seem to be getting away from your theme though. That is, if it's "Xander, Phil interactions". Not a bad thing, but if it's due to loosing focus, you could try writing a companion piece which contains the teams doing work that they can talk about in a bar or something.

Was wondering about "sweetcheeks" scene. Doubt that it would be that quick with Fath, even though it's possible. That leaves a mini given Xander said she was underage. Could it be someone who admired Willow and after decanting Tony from his armor, gave it to Willow as a gift? That could cause interactions between Xander and Phil where Tony has been complaining about his suit being ruined and Phil's bosses are complaining about the tech being unsecured...

You could also have Xander complain to Phil about any ideas that the slayers and council have picked up due to the way the Avengers organization works. Sort of like complaints about how it's no fair they have a rich guy like Tony to support their base, due to comments Andrew has made on the tower. Or, how the mini's now want their own Hellicarrier or something.

Now that Andrew has been dragged into the fic, there's more of a chance of Buffy and Willow or Faith following Xander to the bar. We never did get that scene where they threatened Phil if he was to harm or harass Xander in any way. Or any of Phil's people doing it.

A thought just popped into my head. I don't think Fury will try to poach slayers. I would think that he has enough information to know who they fight. Given that, if the Avengers started recruiting slayers, it would be the same thing as adding another battle front to their war. Given the slayer's war is hidden, and the Avengers are often out in the open, I don't think this would be something he would want to do. Because of this, I think I've lost the little interest I had in this kind of crossover done seriously where the gang team up with the Avengers. Though, now that I think of it, I can't remember a story I've read where this happens that isn't just a battle through NY.

Hope to see more from you.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "twelve" from Elleria
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Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "twelve" from irialonso
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I'm with Dhampyr here, I find more alarming that Loki approves than Hela being with Xander...
And Xander *dun dun dun*, Hela it's a bit more dangerous than Natasha
Review By [irialonso] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "twelve" from serenityselena
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oh my... it seems that Xander is in a pickle... will he get out of it "alive"?
can't wait to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "twelve" from SamDragon
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A lot. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "twelve" from Dhampyr
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If I were Xander I'd be more worried about the fact that Loki approves of him as a potential consort for Hela than anything else at this moment. I mean his date with her is over and he's intact. She might be scary but Xander digs scary women and knows how to deal with them. Loki is the wild card here. Or Frigga depending on her current relationship with her granddaughter. Because a Chosen of Odin as Hela's consort... Frigga might be hearing wedding bells whether Xander and Hela want to hear them or not. lol.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "twelve" from Selonianth
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... You had Xander bang Hela? Well... he's pretty much immune to being tortured for eternity in Hel nao if Anya taught him ANYTHING.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "twelve" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
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Hel... the one woman that makes Natasha seem like a fluffy kitten.
lol
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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