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Review of chapter "Coming Home" from hamishog
Review:
I've enjoyed reading up on your Waifs and Strays series, so I thought today was the day I was going to look this series over.
You love MASH. It doesn't take much to see that. The inclusion of Dr. Benjamin Franklin "Hawkeye" Pierce was classic, beautifully so. And Jacob Carter would have gotten along with him. Once he was out of uniform.
But the most telling thing about this piece was that nobody was perfect. They came, they saw, they screwed up. And then they paid for it. And now the fur will fly.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like Waifs and Strays, but the Weird Sisters universe is quite dear to my heart as well, so I'm glad you like that too.

I tried to show that even with the best of intentions things can go horribly wrong and the heroes are people, warts and all. And I'm happy you read what I hoped I wrote.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [hamishog] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from arturusoriginal
Review:
Great story...the first chapter had me hooked.
I really hope you choose to continue this one.
Comments from author:
My thanks, glad you liked it.

I will, I just have so many other tales to tell as well.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [arturusoriginal] • Date [1 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from spk
Review:
Definitely still liking this story. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you do!

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [spk] • Date [9 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from FireWolfe
Review:
I love this series a lot.; Maybe not as much as lonely souls but it is still great to read. I do hope you return to it soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I rather like it myself. I have some stuff written for it, but not enough to post and I really want to get W&S slightly more integrated before I continue this. (Read: get the Faith and Ora Pro Nobis Stories conencted to LS)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [24 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from SlayingDan
Review:
Good story. Interesting way of bringing the two universes together. The way you've written the characters is very good, seems very realistic and in keeping with how they were shown in the shows. The bits with Jacob and Selmac were very funny, the whole bit with Jack as their pet was great. Hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I do my besst trying to portray the characters as close to canon as I can, until circumstances change them.

I rather enjoyed writing Jacob and Selmak. Poor Jack, they'll hug him and pet him and call him George...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [SlayingDan] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Starfox
Review:
Very good chapter - closed some plot points, opened new ones. Hank's appearance was a surprise, Giles also, if less so. I love the scenes with Willow.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope that the next chapters will hold your interest. I like writing Willow. (I like writing almost anyone, I admit. It can be very cathartic to write a villain on occasion.)

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [Starfox] • Date [25 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from SamDragon
Review:
Great to see a new chapter up. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [22 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from wonderbee
Review:
Dang it, and looks like all that history is currently crushing Giles down, but, would hate to think of how much more he'd be crushed by Joyce if she gets wind of this, as well as what all might go down next time as the gang recovers from their physical injuries at least.
Comments from author:
If he perfomrs the Cruciamentum the words 'balls' 'vise' and 'crushed' will be applicable...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from bradsan
Review:
And again a great chapter.

Hmm I wonder how Joyce will react when she finds out that all the things Buffy, Willow and Xander will do to beat the supernatural. The things they do are mostly illegal, like hacking, stealing etc. They don't have time to do it the legal way. Buffy needs to patrol several times in the evening and at night. Angel always patrols when the vamps went back to their lair but he is gone so Buffy will need to do it. So I wonder how she will manage to deal with the things the Scoobies has to do because life's are at stake and the legal way isn't enough or not fast enough.

And hey no fair Angel wasn't a bad guy neither was Pike. Both helped her fighting and Angel loved her and Pike well he at least cared enough to fight with her. Angelus well that's another story but at least he couldn't kill Buffy one way or another. Angel loved Buffy before he was send to hell after that he was different but so was Buffy.

If I was Willow I would be mad as well and yes not so forgiving like Joyce wants her to be. And those agents really crossed a line. And yes go Willow let them see what you can do. The legal way would be enough and when it won't. Well she can always do other things but that will be a case Joyce probably rather not know.

Love Hank being back and I really would love Joyce and Hank coming back together. I thought the General was married?????

Another very good chapter with really good scenes in it. And sorry another big review. I hope I didn't fall in repeating things.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Joyce has already made part peace with that. After all she knows about Willow's hacking. And a few things might be prevented by Joyce being there to help.

She won't be happy about Buffy having to patrol, but its a reality she will have to deal with, or learn to deal with. It won't be plain sailing.

They weren't bad guys. But they were lousy boyfriends for Buffy from a mother's point of view.

Joyce doesn't want Willow to get into trouble because of her feelings of vengeance and hopes to get her to let go of some of her anger.

It's highly unlikely that Hank and Joyce will get back together. Hammond's wife died of cancer before SG-1 started. That happened here as well.

Not a problem, I don't mind big reviews at all.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [bradsan] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Eureka
Review:
Giles is gonna be in BIG trouble isn't he? Unless of course he decides to not do it and instead tells what was supposed to happen....
Comments from author:
Yes, if he goes through with it he's through...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Eureka] • Date [19 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Very nice chapter.

Loved the Willow thinking about revenge via body cavity search. (shudder)

You can find some very interesting things in boxes, and free money via selling (yard sale or auction)

Good that Hank is back in the picture, but expected them not getting back together.

Giles is going to be in deep shit if he actually goes through with the Cruicimentum. Unless it's the necessity that Buffy gains immunity from the crap. He'd still be in deep shit, but forgiven sooner.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Well, it's what I would plot if I had neded up in custody...

Yes, there will be things found in boxes. I may open up a poll on what they find.

They might get back together, but certainly not yet. But I doubt it myself as well.

There are other ways of makins someone immune that do not involve betrayal and being locked up with a vampire...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [19 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Marcel
Review:
Aaargh no! It ended! Where's the rest? :)

I love the interaction between the universes and I also like that you brought Hank in. Too few stories do that.
Comments from author:
To follow, hopefully fairly soon. ;-)

Thank you. Hank, what we saw of him, was actually a pretty decent father. Like so many things his disappearance had to do with the fact that actors need to be paid...

He's got a part too in Lonely Souls, but if you read it just for that it might be a bit long...;-)

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [Marcel] • Date [19 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from starwolf
Review:
may be this time Giles take his head out of his ass earlier.
great chapter, thanks
Comments from author:
That would be a wise thing to do what with the Air Force people not being amused...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [starwolf] • Date [18 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sickroom and Cell" from grd
Review:
I hope their is a combined SG1/Scooby effort to send Travers and the Watchers into the Hellmouth.
Comments from author:
To a nice moon, shaped in the image of hell...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [grd] • Date [17 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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