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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Nice to see this back...and better than ever.

That was a really good chapter and I particularly like the way you treated Kennedy (I'm sort of a Kennedy 'fan').

Looking forward to the next thrilling installment!

D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Excellent story so far. Absolutely great characterization of people from The Shield and capturing the whole atmosphere of Farmington and "the Barn". ( I think The Shield is one of the greatest shows ever aired and the S7 penultimate episode and final episode the finest 2 last episodes of any show that has ever aired)

Suspect that if either Antwon or Vic push to much regarding Kennedy that Darth Willow could come out to play a bit.

The vamps in Farmington make Harmony Kendall look like a genius.

Looking forward to more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [28 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from war
Review:
Leave it to Kenn to not think things through.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
I just read Chap 8 after watching the end of season 2 of The Shield.

I've gotta say you got the atmosphere of Farmington down very well.

Now, I wonder in your 'new' ending is Antwon going to make a real big mistake when he goes looking for Buffy, Willow and Kennedy...I mean just Faith would be bad enough he-he!

Oh and a little something I found on You Tube...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NLYcWV1oBug

Cheers,
D.

PS: Back in the early years of 'The Troubles' in Northern Ireland because they couldn't get many pistols the IRA (and others) used to convert flare pistols to fire shot gun shells...nasty!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from war
Review:
Cold man Antwon, can't wait to see him go up against the Council.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from war
Review:
Antwon is about to kick over a very big ant hill if he messes with Willow.

Good story looking forward to your next c hapter.
Review By [war] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
"But who would want to go to this much trouble to assassinate Kennedy?"

Probably the guy on the grassy knoll.

Still reading.

D.
Comments from author:
I couldn't help myself, that line was too good to pass up.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from war
Review:
So I take it no one knows about Kenn's extra money making efforts? That's gonna put her in the dog house I bet. Good idea on Riley's part to have locals report to him anything night life related.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
The plot thickens!

D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Everyone underestimates the simple 'kick in the shin', it REALLY hurts!

Nice chapter, surprised (in a good way) to see Kennedy doing the instructoring.

See ya,
D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Gotta say this fic should be getting more reviews.

Its well written and I think you've got the characterisation down really well for the 'Shield' charcters. Looking forward to how you deal with tthe BtVS ones.

I remember that scene with the search dog.

Now I wonder who the Unarmed Combat instructor could be?

D.

Ps, must really dig out my 'The Shield' DVD's sometime soon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
There's not enough 'The Shield' fics about. It was one of my fav TV shows, but after season four I thought it went down hill.

Anyway, liked your fic and I'm going to track it to make sure I don't miss anything.

Keep up the good work,

D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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