Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Can Neutral Be A Side Of It's Own?

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from deathgeonous
Review:
This is/was both fun and needs to be continued. That said, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [12 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from Alkeni
Review:
Good fic so far. I hope you update soon.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from smee
Review:
Wow, did not see that last part coming. I like your story, and the way you explained slayers in the fey world was perfect. Can't wait for more.
Review By [smee] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, this needs to be continued. It's such a rare crossover, and it's good as well. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from FireFlash
Review:
Well, this is interesting. I watched the first season of Lost Girl, but lost (hehe) interest shortly thereafter. Perhaps I'll start watching again, just for more background on this story. Either way, I like what you've done with the Slayer(s), although I do wonder if you've done away with the Watchers, or also integrated them into the LG universe somehow. So, now that Neutral is its own faction, will Bo be getting more followers? Or will they mostly survive on the tithes from the Dark/Light fae within the new Neutral territory? To paraphrase a technology retailer's slogan, "I've got questions; You've got answers." :)

I look forward to more.
-K
Comments from author:
For now the tithes are gonna be their primary income, other than Bo's little gig. The money from the tithes will be substantial enough to help them out for a while yet.

That is not to say that there won't be other Neutral Fae, possibly sooner and possibly later, but for the time being they're alone.

I hope that answered only the very most large questions and was utterly unhelpful otherwise. ;)
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from SlayingDan
Review:
Interesting idea. The way Slayers were kept but made part of the fae world was interesting. Hope we get to see other people from 'Buffy' introduced so the that she isn't on her lonesome. And hope the time between the next chapter and those after is less than between the 1st and 2nd.
Comments from author:
I will try, busy busy busy.
Review By [SlayingDan] • Date [15 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from Gideon
Review:
Not much for Buffy to do in this chapter but it is a necessary step for Bo to formalize her new status and her territory. Hopefully she can find a way to convince the Dark Fae to sign up.
As for that last revelation, I hope Bo doesn't let it affect her relationship with Evony. She is not responsible for the sins of her father.
Comments from author:
I'm just glad so many people get that it's needed.

Bo's reaction will be in the next chapter.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from Eureka
Review:
So Bo and Evony are half Sisters? LOL Can't wait to read more!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from slmncpm
Review:
holy guacamole!!! i so love this story.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Good to see more of this story; I would have liked to see some other 'Buffy' characters showing up, but the rules established for the Neutral Fae in terms of their interaction with the other two sides all make sense (Although I will continue to assume that Bo's going to ensure a more 'equal rights for humans' policy than the Light or Dark until I hear otherwise).

Plus, the consequences of that last revelation are DEFINITELY going to be interesting to see...
Comments from author:
More Buffy characters will pop up, but I'm uncertain who and in exactly what capacity yet.

I don't know exactly what you mean by "equal rights for humans" exactly. Kenzi is the only human in Bo's purview, she can't effect how either the Light or the Dark treat their humans. She can effect how the Neutral fae feed, but since it's a general rule to avoid killing humans, even if the reason is different, that's not much of a change. Sadly Bo can't affect the Dark or the Light's policies toward humans in any way, even though she wants to.

As to the little revelation... well... yes, they are.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, nice update. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Playing Politics" from GypsyDruid
Review:
Bo and Evony, half sisters? Yeah, that's gonna be awkward. That's the greatest Lost Girl concept I've read in a while.
Comments from author:
Awkward? Only a lot.
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oaths Sworn" from TroyGuffey
Review:
An interesting interpretation.

The Neutral side seems to be more about Chaos, rather than Good and Evil. Fae who roll their own way.
Comments from author:
Less chaos, they are not anarchists, and more them not caring what side someone is on.

Also, though the Light and Dark fae may *sound* split good and evil... they both follow the same laws, Light Fae just look at humanity different than Dark do. All fae feed on humanity, though all in different ways.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oaths Sworn" from soulfulone
Review:
This was a great start and very clever way to add slayers to the Fae world. I very much look forward to reading more and hope you come back to the story soon. And as much as I like Tamsin, I really loved how Buffy basically kicked her ass.
Comments from author:
Valkyries are born warriors, like the Amazons, Slayers need to be capable of killing said born warriors.

Next chap coming when I get comptime to finish it.

Edit: Just saw your review history, I'm your first review in over a year? Awesome.
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oaths Sworn" from slmncpm
Review:
i love love love this! please write some more soon?
Comments from author:
Some of the next chapter is done, finishing and posting it is another story at the moment.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 2 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking