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Review of chapter "24" from FinalGuardian
Review:
*chuckle* What's kind of sad is that even with a few thousand of them, attacking a group with all their abilities in tight quarters they'd still probably lose.
Comments from author:
That point is sorta made in the next part!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [29 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "24" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Riley, we have a couple thousand natives coming in from a mile away or so. ..

-It's a trap!!!
Comments from author:
Well they are filled with bad intentions!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [29 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "23" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "23" from slmncpm
Review:
i am very happy to see an update!
Comments from author:
I am very happy you're happy!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "23" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Ah, another mystery...might we surmise that they've stumbled upon the homeworld of the Nox, or someplace similar? Or is this completely different?
Comments from author:
No, this is something different.

Although yours was a good idea.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Just got caught up! Love this story!
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it. By all means, try the Reality War,
this story's sequel.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [8 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
I forget how Angel lives again, as well as what he costumed as. Did he actually pop some adamantium claws, or were they Sabretooth's claws? And who shot the Jaffa with lightning?

Well, it was a good action sequence, one which punctuated the negotiations rather well. Keep writing and we'll keep reading. ..
Comments from author:
Angel's human now because he went as a mutant Wolverine, so like
Giles he has matching physiology to his race. Aura was Storm....

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from grd
Review:
Thank you for another exciting chapter. I love this series. The irony of the surprise attack's result was funny.
Comments from author:
The law of unintended consequences. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from grd
Review:
I really enjoy this saga. Happy to always see another chapter.
Comments from author:
Hopefully there's plenty to come.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [9 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
I like how this is starting to tie in with the sequel; let's just be careful that the two don't begin to overlap.
Comments from author:
Heh. Different universes, I'll be really messing up to
make the two of them overlap.

Which given my limitations is certainly possible!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from Bluesnowman
Review:
great work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [29 May 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from RedCalypso
Review:
I really like where you're going with this story. I look forward to the team finding Atlantis. There is one jarring note. They keep finding the same kind of tower again and again with no visible door, get inside and set off the self-destruct. At least the last chapter had a dome instead of a tower...
Comments from author:
I accept the flaw. To be honest I suck at
imagining and writing architecture\buildings. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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