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Review of chapter "Blue" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Huh?

Edit: I got the pregnancy joke, but the wand comment made no sense. Why would Buffy have a wand or care what color it was?
Comments from author:
Yeah, I seem to get that a bit on this one.
I guess that the "blue" part was a bit too vague, and the punch line fell flat. A lot.

"Old" pregnancy tests were blue if "positive", and I could have used any item in the end. But I've been reading a bit of HP Fanfic lately, so I settles on that as the punchline.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blue" from Martin
Review:
Why does she have a wand? That is my confused question. Then what type of wand? Harry Potter type? Sailor Princess type?
Comments from author:
Maybe I shouldn't have written this, on a bus, caffeine deprived. I t seems the "joke" I thought was funny at the time, is not. Apparently. :(

The wand is just a punchline, and not really important to the setup. I could have just used Mr. Pointy, or something else she might have cherished. However as this is a plot bunny, I'm thinking Harry potter, Sometime after Halloween. (The first Harry potter book was actually released in the UK about 6 months before that episode was aired, so no time shift needed)

I tried to set it up so the reader might think she was pregnant. Old tests (pre 2000?) changed to blue if you were, today they just have lines, if I recall.
Review By [Martin] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blue" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Maybe, I'm being a guy, BUT a Blue Wand, So What. If my LightSaber turned pink, I could still kick ass with it. My Ethos is 1st DOES IT WORK? If it does, use it. 2. IF THE COLOR OFFENDS ME...Change it, dye it, or whatever, BUT FIRST IT MUST WORK, ALL ELSE IS AT BEST SECONDARY, IF IT EVEN REGISTERS THAT HIGH. MOST THINGS DON'T!
Comments from author:
Trust Buffy to treat a wand as a fashion accessory.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Polyjuiced" from bookworm
Review:
Ha, all of these have been fun. I'm glad you continued the Artemis one, I'll enjoy seeing where that goes. This particular one is amusing, but for some reason it seems to have repeated itself - when you reach the last sentence it goes back to the beginning and does it all again.
Comments from author:
Thanks. You are right. I must have stuttered on the paste :P
Fixed.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Woke up in Vegas" from (Past Donor)ScottWanderer
Review:
Actually a great idea. Not many people know that Artemis of greek mythology was celibate but not chaste. Yes there is a difference. She asked her father (Zeus) to never make her marry. he agreed because she was one of Daddy's favorites. Later she fell in love with a giant named Orion but was tricked into killing him by her twin brother, Apollo, before she could marry him. She gives every mortal who tries to court her a chance. She transforms them into a stag and swears on her godhood if they survive the night's hunt she will marry him. Sure it is the same chance of surviving calling Zeus an asshat to his face, but still a chance.

Edit:

Given how Gods operate it could be anything. Hell any of the love or marriage gods would do it in a heartbeat. Any god who liked Xander would do it. Any god who thought they owed Artemis would do it. And likely the would team up. This would reek of Aphrodite, Hermes, and Dionysus. Then again it could be Apollo making amends for Orion or perhaps Step mother Hera is tired of her stepdaughter running around unwed. About the only innocent party in all of this would be Zeus, for once in his lecherous life.
Comments from author:
The Greek gods were not above trying to trick each other, as you said Apollo did. Would it be conceivable to have Aphrodite involved in tricking her into a night in Vegas (as a temporary mortal), that ended up getting out of hand?
Review By [(Past Donor)ScottWanderer] • Date [30 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Woke up in Vegas" from Dragonbaita
Review:
Oh PLEASE . PLEASE continue this!!! Artemis?! The VIRGINAL GODDESS!!
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Review By [Dragonbaita] • Date [30 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Woke up in Vegas" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
If this is the Percy Jackson Artemis, this could become extremely weird..
Comments from author:
Or it could just be the "original" Greek Mythological Artemis, in which case Xander is in deep, deep trouble. Artemis was a virgin, and seem to have hexed anyone trying to get ... frisky.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Woke up in Vegas" from snakeyes
Review:
Both are decent stories that would be great if expanded upon
Comments from author:
Review By [snakeyes] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Woke up in Vegas" from Ishikawa
Review:
Great concept, i would love for ANYONE to pick it up and run with it, preferably with a Hercules/Xena or DC Crossover... oh the possibilities.
Review By [Ishikawa] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Untitled BtVS/HP" from wonderbee
Review:
Heh, that was an interesting moment, and can picture Xander with his luck managing to save the wizard ing world, and wouldn't it be something to see if his role got found out, I'd imagine the government would likely fall before allowing that he could have stopped the dark lord and his flunkies.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Untitled BtVS/HP" from Difdi
Review:
Xander the Prophecy Breaker strikes again!
Comments from author:
Nice angle. I hadn't even thought of it that way :)
Review By [Difdi] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Untitled BtVS/HP" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Only Xander could take out Moldyshorts and some of his death suckers by accident.
Comments from author:
Even if you stick to canon, I'm not entirely sure the Death Eaters and mouldy would appreciate the impact modern weaponry would have on them.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Untitled BtVS/HP" from Greywizard
Review:
LMAO reading this!

And it's just perfectly in keeping with the way things happen to Xander, in particular, and the Scoobies in general. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Untitled BtVS/HP" from animesam
Review:
i like this one, it something i would love to read.
Xander /Tonks would make a good pairing
Review By [animesam] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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