Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DigiSim
Titles can be a little misleading. For example, before I read this story, I thought Buffy was going to be waiting for a certain plumber.
Review By [DigiSim
] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Sounds like a good story but you're going to want to fix the formatting. If you took it from a .txt document you need to take off word wrap before copy+paste to fix the issue. I've had it happen to me fairly often.
Review By [Genuka
] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ralphmullins
Nice chapter. I'm interested in were you take this story. I look forward to your next chapter.
Review By [ralphmullins
] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated