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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from leb
Review:
this is a good story, I cant wait to see what will happen next
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.

The next chapter is partially written, so I just have to wait for my muse to let me complete it.
Review By [leb] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from greysh
Review:
interesting :) I like your xander.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm trying to make him different from the usual run of the mill stereotype.
Review By [greysh] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
nice chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from OlBear
Review:
Another great chapter for a story I'm really starting to enjoy. Hopefully you'll have Xander realise that Sunnydale is no longer the place for him and he'll light out for greener pastures. Looking forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)

And Xander will be leaving Sunnydale in the aftermath of upcoming events, and he'll be meeting some *very* interesting people and other beings. ;-)
Review By [OlBear] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Strange that now that he can live a long time he's concerned with it.
Comments from author:
Well, he's only now realizing that the likelihood he'll live through high school has increased significantly, so he's making plans to take advantage of that probability.

I see Xander as someone who's never really believed that he'll survive helping Buffy with the Slaying, so now that he's finally gained an incredibly powerful healing ability, he's finally beginning to believe that he'll live long enough to have to worry about other things, like having a career and possibly a life aside from the Slaying.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Typhonis
Review:
Makes you wonder if Wilkins didn't add something into the 'Sunnydale Effect' to drain the common sense from people who lived in Sunnydale. Would explain all of the attempts to open the damn Hellmouth.


Angel knows Xander is alive. He also knows something hinky is goiong on , like Kendra. How long till he realises Xander is an immortal? How long till the others realise that something is up with Xander and it isn't Halloween related?

How long till another side in the fight for reality makes a move and the game changes once more?
Comments from author:
Your comment about Wilkins makes a perfect Sunnydale sort of sense, and I think that I might use that as an explanation for 'Sunnydale Syndrome' in a future story/storyline.

And I will make note that this is *Angelus*, not Angel who is the bad guy here. Angel was a spineless wuss, while Angelus was a narcissistic psychotic asshole. There is a big difference between the two.

And given the canon way both Buffy and Willow (and Giles, more by default) apparently thought that Xander would never change from the image they'd decided best fit him, I really don't see them noticing any further major changes in him unless he dons a spandex body-stocking and a cape adn begins flying through the air. ;-)
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Great chapter. I love the way you built the Hyena and Soldier impact on Xander's mind into how he is able to retain his personality. This is turning into a story with a lot of legs, look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you're enjoying the story, and I'll try to get the next chapter out soon.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from wonderbee
Review:
Very nice section, loved seeing Angelus in a fury at seeing Xander alive there, and can't wait to see what else will continue to diverge harder from the canon as Xander continues to learn more about what all he is becoming now, and if Angelus will end up walking away from it for the most part, or if Xander will break out the dust buster for him?
Comments from author:
Well, all I can say right now is that canon is going out the window in the very near future, and very little will be the same forever after, regardless of what the PTB might want. ;-)
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Not bad.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Chikageko
Review:
nice new chapter. not saying you should or shouldn't, but i think it'd be useful to actually write the scene where Zander picks up various skills from the pile, wipes off the personal memories and puts them in his head and reviews various other memories before balling them up and throwing them in the metaphorical trash bin. If nothing else it'll keep people from going WTF when you want to pull out an immortal or apparently sorcerous ability to help him OP Sunnydale.
Comments from author:
I'll probably be showing something like that in a later chapter, when and where it fits in best.

Thanks for the suggestion.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from lordamnesia
Review:
Awesome! A body jumper runs into a person who knows how to protect himself against being possessed, and has a talent for it too! Keep up the incredible work!
Comments from author:
Not so much a body jumper as a memory cascade which threatened to overwhelm Xander.

And his previous work on mental defenses is what enabled him to save himself.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Robby
Review:
Heh, looks like Xander just got someone some new tools...and talents.

Really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Yes, indeed. ;-)

And things are just starting to gel now. ;-)
Review By [Robby] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written hardening of Xander's personality and an unusual take on a 'dark' quickening.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I"m happy that my portrayal of Xander's changes are being viewed as reasonable, especially given the context of the changes.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Typhonis
Review:
Nice story so far. So Xander/Piper, Xander/Prue, Xander/Phoebe, or Xander/Paige? It is partially a Charmed crossover so the oh hooded one could have been the Source.

Lets face facts we have no idea how many teams of good guys and bad guys their are. Whether they are 'good' or 'bad' by human definition. All we know is that their are at least two 'sides' at work and they may have or not have Humanity's best interest at heart.


Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Well, all I can really say at the moment is that there aren't any plans for Xander meeting up with any of the sisters anytime soon, since he's going to be quite occupied with other things demanding his attention.

And, yes, the exact definition of who's a 'good guy' or a 'bad guy' seem to be determined by whose definition you're using. ;-)

The next chapter will be posted fairly soon.
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [27 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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