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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Mcspender
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I hope those Vvaptroshurn went to their version of Valhalla to meet with their gods and meet their judgment. They fought bravely, foolishly, but bravely.

To think they were deceived by the love of Seo's for her mom. Seo, that was so noble of her, it really brought a lump in my throat =).

And the 88719 are really good. Too bad that Saxon is still under the radar on this one.

Cool fic, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [12 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Gideon
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So the real authorities arrive just in time to not do anything useful? Typical!
You do have a way of ending stories with a real emotional punch, and this one us no different! Well done.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from wswords
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This is why I never try and predict your stories. I know it is futile (except Prophesy of Harkness [ironic the one story I predicted was posted in one chapter]).

I wonder how you will write/wrote Buffy reading the Master. I have a way in my head that I think might be good, but exceeding my expectations is normal for you, so no pressure.

Also I am a little surprised you don't have a story where the main plot is Buffy trying to stop Rose from finding out she knows the Doctor (which would come up for some reason) after Rose meets him. It just seems the sort of story that you would write.
Comments from author:
I actually did consider writing that story. I had an idea of Buffy going to visit Rose and Jackie, realizing the Doctor was there, and then running away. Rose catches up to her, is confused, then figures out, for herself, that Buffy knows the Doctor in his future.

Problem is... it just didn't seem to go anywhere interesting. There wouldn't be any real character change because of it -- since Rose's life is pretty Doctor-centered, at that point, and Buffy's life had its turning point when Buffy decided maybe Rose running off with the Doctor was a good thing. And there would be no plot. And... well... yeah.

So I didn't bother writing it.

I also considered writing the actual story of Buffy beating up Jimmy Stone just because she's pissed off at someone beating up his girlfriend, then turning around and realizing that she recognizing the girl she just saved. But, once again, predictable.

Better just alluded to, and then left alone.

Best reaction line from Buffy about the Master? When she's wandering across the destroyed Earth, and encounters one of those giant statues the Master's been sculpting of himself:

"You know, I think the Master's got the biggest god-complex I've ever seen," said Buffy. She tilted her head to the side. "And I've met actual gods."
Review By [wswords] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Gideon
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Well it seems like both sides want a fight to the death! A pity that it may mean Buffy won't find out it was Saxon behind it all. I can't imagine anything more likely to turn Buffy against Saxon than this!
Comments from author:
As you say. A real pity.

The good news is... Buffy might not know consciously that Saxon's evil... but she has a really strong subconscious reaction against him.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Mcspender
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Nice trick the one Jack used to stop Seo, let's see if Buffy can join forces with him.
And no, Revenge can never be an acceptable substitute for Justice. You're right, I do feel sorry for the Vvaptroshurn too, but they're so blinded by their rage, that they are beyond help or redemption.

And Saxon shows his ugly mug again, oh boy :S.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Good thing you think that. Otherwise, I'd probably get a lot of negative reactions to the conclusion of this story.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Gideon
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A nice clash here between the pragmatism of Torchwood and the Idealism of Buffy. Who will Seo follow?
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Yeah, just wait until I get into the whole what's-it-like-to-die thing, in one of my future stories. I think I do a great job of blending Buffy (heaven) with Torchwood (we're all just animals and there's nothing).
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Cutiepie
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You know, I never even stand a chance at guessing where you are taking any of your stories. They are so far from predictable that it would be a waste of my time to even try. Maybe that is why they are so VERY engrossing. Once it comes out, everything is very logical and connected, but there are so many twists and turns that it is a thrill to read . . . no, to EXPERIENCE it as it unfolds. I am so glad that I managed to stumble upon one of your stories when I did. To think of not having them to read now, it leaves me feeling like there would be a hole in my life, and I would be very sad. So, I'm glad that you continue to churn out chapters and chapters of stories for me (of course, it is ALL JUST FOR ME, right). =]
Comments from author:
Yep. It's just for you. ;-)

Thank you. I do always try to give my stories twists, but I never want those twists to come out of nowhere. I want you to say, "Oh, wow, I wasn't expecting that", but then, when you reflect on it or read it again, it all makes sense.

I'm glad that I have readers like you that keep reading! This series is getting a lot less foot-traffic than my last, so it's good to have people who appreciate the writing.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [8 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Mcspender
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So, the Vvaptroshurn are in mission of revenge, and they want to genocide the other side out of spite?. Talk about having a well cooked grudge =S.

And I really wanna see Seo's plan to payback those aliens.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
You can totally understand why the two aliens are so bitter, at the beginning of the story, when they talk about ending the world. They've been through hell and back. It doesn't make what they did or are doing right, but you can see why they're upset about it.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Gideon
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Ouch, that is a pretty bad bomb. And if they caught Ianto they know Torchwood is onto them!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Mcspender
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So basically they have unlimited access to Torchwood, and they've been using kids to build a weapon of mass destruction??.
Unless Jack can come up with something, I think UNIT has to know about this :S.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Gideon
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I have a feeling that what Seo doesn't want to remember may not be what they think it is. But whatever is happening must be very bad. And if Seo couldn't get out of it by herself they will have to be careful!
Comments from author:
Oh, yeah. As you say.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Keshkreature
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Poor Seo! And you're right, this is an awesome mystery! :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you! *Bows*
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mcspender
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Yeah, Seo's had to find out what was going on, and she paid for getting the info =(.
Good thing she had her version of a dead man's switch in case of that happening. I think it's time for a little Sanctioning time, Buffy style.

Nice to see a law enforcement agency from the larger Doctor Who universe. Any chance to see them in action??.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
You'll find out more about 88719 soon enough.

Yeah, there are a bunch of law forces you'll see come into play, in this series, that I've made up. I've been trying to get more creative with my villains and monsters and aliens, and stop stealing them all from the Whoverse or Buffyverse.

Although... I still do a lot of the above.

Buffy, of course, is obviously super-pissed-off. But the more interesting person, actually, is Jack. Who is clearly trying to act all Torchwood Hero and get the aliens and be his normal, confident self -- but he's really, *really* upset about all of this.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Gideon
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Seo has been retconning herself? Maybe she has been the one sedating Alison too? You know, so she wouldn't draw attention to herself from the thing that Seo finds too horrible to even remember?
Comments from author:
Not a bad theory. Sounds a little like something she'd do.

Although, actually, I think Seo's more the kind of person who'd just lie to you and manipulate you, instead of drugging you and brainwashing you.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Mcspender
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I think somebody should tell Seo's that this type of Intel operations are very risky. Both to mind and body health.
And once again, I was listening to this Bourne Supremacy track, which I think it's quite fitting to this chapter xD https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rueJpG3GZk4

Any chance for a crossover with Bourne ;)??
Cool chapter, see ya!!!
Comments from author:
Keep checking, maybe you'll see a crossover with Bourne. I can't say, right now, because I don't have anything in mind. But... well... when people make requests, the thought kind of lingers in my mind. And eventually turns into a story. Which means... if you keep reading... you'll probably see it at some point in the future.

Yep, very risky. But that's kind of what the Doctor does. Buffy's a lot more with the research and care. The Doctor purposely wanders out to look for stuff that could kill him, just to see what it is that he's up against.

Actually, I should have Buffy lecture Seo about this, at some point.

I've already had Buffy lecture Seo on how she can't just go from adventure to adventure, she has to stay a bit after and do the whole 'saying goodbye, resolving everyday life thing.' Seo informs Buffy that that's, "cruel and unusual punishment!"

I think she'd rather take the torture.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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