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Review of chapter "Meanwhile... Back at the funny farm..." from Genuka
Review:
HA! They're going to be in for a shock!
Comments from author:
Yep (popping the 'p')! And there WILL be THUNDER! But not in paradise.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile... Back at the funny farm..." from jormunguard
Review:
Interesting chapter, but now I'm really confused. You say in the description that Willow, Buffy and Xander are all going as a theme, even in the first two chapters you have all three going as this theme. Then we get to this chapter and Willow's back to being the ghost again, what happened?

EDIT: I don't think I've ever said this to an author, but I think you need to go back and reread your own story. From chapter 2: “Buffy...” Giles began, but was interrupted by Jenny, “Wow, you guys really did it! You look great in red as Captain Marvel Buffy. The one piece without the leggings really suits you and glad you kept the boots! Willow, I see you kept the blue outfit simple, but Xander! Wow! You are totally rocking the white outfit with the top and leggings! But, uh, you can't call yourself Mary Marvel...”

You said it yourself that Willow did have on a Marvel family costume but the next time we see her is in chapter 4 and she's the ghost again. What happened?
Comments from author:
In chapter 2 it was shown that Willow didnt change her costume.

Thanx for reviewing!

EDIT: Well, I do need a BETA! But, you are right. I really didn't say anything about Willow not adding anything to the costume. I can fix that!
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meanwhile... Back at the funny farm..." from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh Ethan you bad boy things could have gone much worse for you.
Great chapter!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Thankyou, glad u liked it! Appreciate the review!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meanwhile... Back at the funny farm..." from DarthPayne
Review:
uhoh, i have a feeling that using 'Shazam' to end the spell might've been a bad idea...
Comments from author:
Yes.
No.
Maybe?
Thanx 4 reviewing!
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Misplaced Alter Ego's" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting chapter.
Comments from author:
Thankyou. I appreciate it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [29 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Misplaced Alter Ego's" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* Just a bit clueless. Think the native personalities are showing through?
Comments from author:
Ah, but they ARE the native personalities!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting in character" from banditdoz
Review:
Yay Love it :D
Comments from author:
Thank You!!
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [12 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting in character" from trongod
Review:
Don't quite get this - it reads as though the only thing they got from Ethan's was Buffy's boots, /maybe/ but probably Giles and Jenny's costumes, so I'm really thinking that neither Willow nor Xander are going to be affected by the Chaos spell...

Or am I wrong?

Other than that, I really am enjoying this; /very/ light hearted story and Giles isn't the usual bland, stick in the mud. Excellent work!
Comments from author:
Egggsssellent!

Though Mary marvel wore a one piece dress, so Xander had to get a pair of tights from ethans.

As for Willow...

Read on!
Review By [trongod] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting in character" from SamJames
Review:
Interesting setup. The LSH didn't have a Ghost Girl but did have a Phantom Girl. It may have changed in the latest reboot but the S2 Xander would be going by the 90s version anyway.

Also, Giles, being British would know the British versions, Marvelman, which had a Kid Marvelman who was a boy, not a girl.
Comments from author:
Right, Phanton girl... sure, I knew that!
...
but, seriously, Willow always went as a ghost and that is what I had in the forefront of my lobes when I wrote it.

Yeah, I know bout Marvel Man. You know about Marvel Man. Xander, being the uber comic geek MIGHT know about Marvel Man. The rest of them? Probably not.
Review By [SamJames] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting in character" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* Sometimes I wish I were more fluent in Marvel rather than DC. *sigh*
Comments from author:
Glad ya liked it!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting in character" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Grew up with shazam! Looking forward to how it all works out!
Comments from author:
Same here. Though i like the retcon "The Power of Shazam!" I just hope can do it justice!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting in character" from VillageOrchid
Review:
You got me. I don't know who Giles and Jenny are dressed as. Meanwhile, cool character based reasons and interactions on the costume issue for the younger scoobies.
Comments from author:
look up "The Power of Shazam!" on Wiki. Thanx, happy ya liked it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting in character" from removedauthor
Review:
Grate chapter just as grate as the last one was I hope you continue writing this story.
Comments from author:
Yep, definatly wil continue as RL allows
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well Shazam! There's an idea!" from Genuka
Review:
*laughs & falls out of chair* More!
Comments from author:
I'm working on more! Glad I you were amused, but the falling out of a chair? You may need to get that looked at! lol
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Well Shazam! There's an idea!" from removedauthor
Review:
Grate story so far I look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
So do I...
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
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