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Review of chapter "A Place to Fall and Explorations to Be Found" from LadyFoxFire
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Damn I wish I hadn't moved this in my 'to read' list when you first posted it. I should have read it right away! Love how you have Xander dealing with everything and how he interacts with everyone. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place to Fall and Explorations to Be Found" from cyberfish
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I don`t know what you have planed for this story,( though I am looking forward to finding out ) but have you ever thought about a version where Xander does not get to go home. One where he is stuck there. It would be great,Xander becoming part of Captain America`s team,even if only as support. As Howard `s aid and friend he would influence Howard`s relationship with Tony for the better.After all Xander know`s and cat tell Howard about neglectful parents and how they effect their children As i see it the PTB`s would love it.He`s gone and out of their hair,stuck in the past or shift to an A.U. by the acts of a demon, they got rid of the trouble making,wild card and their hands are clean.I promise to read that story too,if you decide to write I promise to read and review it too.

Bty,as for Xander becoming the Winter Solder. he might just be able to be survive that fall (if he took it) remember the hyena boost.He is tougher that normal.
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place to Fall and Explorations to Be Found" from djhardim
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One thing to remember is that Bucky, during his time as a prisoner of Hydra, was the subject of experiments by Hydra scientists aimed at enhancing soldiers.

The only reason that Bucky survived his fall is the serum he was given.

If Xander was put in a similar situation on the train, chances are that he would die as a result of the fall.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place to Fall and Explorations to Be Found" from cyberfish
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I like this story a lot.Thank you for continuing it.

You know.if Xander ever revels some he should not of the future.You could make this an A.U. .Just a very close one to his own.(smiles)
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place to Fall and Explorations to Be Found" from eriktheviking
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A well written start to Xander being integrated to the unit.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Place to Fall and Explorations to Be Found" from raxadian
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Wow, The Cap has issues.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Creative Collaborations" from raxadian
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It would be fun if Xander became the Winter Soldier instead of Bucky.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Informational Exchanges" from raxadian
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Ah yes, soldier boy memories.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Falling Down the Rabbit Hole" from raxadian
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And since he is American, they can recruit him in the army.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Reprisal" from raxadian
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So, Xander will become the Captain, or meet him.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Chance Happenstance" from raxadian
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Be careful with what you say out loud in the Hellmouth.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Creative Collaborations" from SandraD
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I am absolutely loving this!! I've recently dived in to fics that have Xander interacting with the Marvel characters and yours is one of the best I have found so far. Not to mention the only one that did it via time travel (another favorite genre).

Loving the building friendship between Xan and Cap. I also really like that you've managed to include Cap's team in a way that doesn't overpower the 2 central characters. I've read enough fics that have seriously turned me off because they have too many "minor" characters with overwhelmingly dominant personalities that the actual story arc gets completely lost in all the commotion. Those authors tend to lose me within the first 2 chapters.

You've got this fic marked as slash but I haven't seen any specific notes regarding the pairing. Really hoping for Xan/Steve and, if that's the way you are going, you're doing beautifully with a slow build. Too many crossover writers like to throw their guys together and have them hop in the sack after a couple of flirty scenes. Not that I don't read and enjoy those fics! But sometimes the slow build is just what the doctor ordered, you know?

Anyway... I saw that it's been over a year since your last post, but I'm not really getting that abandonment vibe from this for some reason. *shrug* Maybe it's hopeful thinking, but I don't feel like we've seen the last of this great fic. I'll just start tracking and look forward to your next update. Keep up the great work!!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it.

I thought I posted chapter six here ,like I had when I update earlier this year on AO3, but alas it didn't happen. So I just posted it.

I do intend to finish this, but the next two chapters are being difficult. Not to mention, the end still needs writing, though most of that is done. This is more Pre-slash than full on slash and it is like you said a slow build.

I've been working on the next two chapter but it's been slow going.
Review By [SandraD] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Creative Collaborations" from twlight
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This is wonderful. I love how Xander has been able to help Steve in such a simple and huge way. I am looking forward to more of this wonderful wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [9 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Creative Collaborations" from DieselDriver
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kind of a semi sad place to leave off. I hope there's more soon. I'm definitely tracking this one.

Thanks for the posting.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Informational Exchanges" from DieselDriver
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I see now how appropriate your story title is. Both sides unwilling to tell the other the whole truth because of uncertainty of the other's reactions when doing so would clear up a whole big pile of mistrust. Catch 22 again. Can't talk because of the mistrust that talking would do away with. Very well written by the way.

Great story so far.

edit: BTW, there's a very simple way to get back to the present and see his friends again. He could use the same method that Commander Owens did in "The Final Countdown" by Martin Caiden. It's only 60 years. He'd have plenty of time to invest if he remembers the right things to invest in, microsoft, lucas films etc from the 80's on. Not sure about before, maybe by a bit of silver in anticipation of the Bucky Brothers attempt to corner the market. One of the guys I used to work for sold enough silver to pay cash for a house. he'd bought it at $1 to $2.50 an ounce and sold it for about $18. Even then it went up to about $42 an ounce before their attempt crashed. That was about 1983. Cash it in when it hits $40 and buy all the microsoft he could get. Leave a very nice present for his friends. The scene at the end of the movie version where Laskey realizes that the mysterious Mr. Tideman is actual Commander Owens was really cool. It was even better in the novel.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
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