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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Amazing!! I love how Jack gets Seo. And at the end I literally went "awwwwwww"
Comments from author:
Thank you! I think Jack's a really good father-figure for Seo. In some ways, better even than the Doctor.

And she's good for him, too.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [20 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
I'm glad Buffy has another opinion on Seo. Jack is able to see things that Buffy won't be able to see and relate to Seo in ways Buffy can't. Together they can raise her better than either could alone.
Comments from author:
You said it.

Jack and Buffy together make a dynamite support team for Seo.

And you'll see, later, that the Doctor thinks so, too. I'm planning on having Seo meet up with the Doctor, again, at some point, and whenever Seo misbehaves or screws up, the Doctor tells her to "shape up, or I'm sending you back to Captain Jack!"
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Letomo
Review:
Ah, cute ending.

One little quibble - why did Seo say she could regenerate if hurt? Isn't she aware that all her regenerations were burned out? Or is there another story yet to occur where she regains some or all of them?
Comments from author:
She loses and subsequently regains all her regenerations in Happy Endings.

Regaining her regenerations is what allows her to gain back Twilight, so she could destroy it. Also, regaining them all in one go causes her to smell very strongly of regenerational energy, which causes the Family of Blood to go after the Doctor.

I *did*, however, miss a story. You're right. That was a slip-up of mine. I'll post it, next.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [15 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
At least this time, Jack will be able to enjoy part of the experience of being a father.

The father figure of a veeery intelligent, 99 years old teenager, who by the way loves doing weird things to dishwashers and totally enjoys explosions a little bit tooo much.

Cool fic, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
And, as you'll soon find out, eventually does gain the ability to travel through time, and winds up having a very bad habit of screwing with Jack's past.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Keshkreature
Review:
That last bit was especially poignant. :) I was just looking through the latest, hoping I'd find some Seo, and there it was!
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks. I didn't know if the last bit would work.

Not to fear, you'll be getting a lot more Seo in the future. You haven't even seen Seo as a baby, yet!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [14 May 13] • Not Rated
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