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Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from spk
Review:
Still enjoying this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [8 Aug 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from Kateydidnt
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Interesting story so far! I look forward to more. One nit-pick. Buffy is a minor--and NCIS knows it. They can't question her without a legal guardian or court appointed guardian ad litem. And Gibbs, though her biological father, does not have any legal guardianship here. Additionally he could not act as both guardian and investigator.

Edit: Guess I should read more carefully--I was confused as to when in season 3 this was taking place. So if Buffy is already past her 18th birthday then my entire earlier comment above is null and void. Sorry about that!
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from (Past Donor)merlyna
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Hi! I just found this story and am really enjoying it very much. We find our familiar characters at a familiar time period in BTVS canon, and from there you have taken them on a new adventure -- you have done a great job of keeping them true to character as well as weaving together BTVS and NCIS. What you are doing with Faith's development is very interesting. Also the storyline with the swords is pretty clever, I think! Thanks for sharing your writing! I look forward to the rest of the tale. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)merlyna] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from Eureka
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Always nice to see a new chapter. Can't wait to see what new developments you bring in.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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awesome chapter. I love that she saved Tim from falling and they know that. Jethro has to be asking himself about who he really thinks Buffy is after she did that. I imagine that they will up security on Buffy after this. Looking forward to more and hoping you will update soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from bradsan
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Gibbs was to soon with calling Buffy with her real name. Being Buffy she will do everything to protect Joyce the only mom she knows. With a normal person it would be a good move.

Well wonder what Tim will say. Coming back for him shows she is not a murderer.

Ziva should know about Slayers. I can't picture mossad not knowing about it so if they know Ziva should know also. Is my guess.

The government should also know about The Slayer. I don't think the Council can get away with all the things they do if they don't have some contacts in the government. High contacts to solve things. So I wonder when they will interfere. I know the Watcher Council don't care what happened to their Slayers but it's a huge different to have Faith on the lose or Buffy. They prefer Buffy even when they don't like her. Faith is in their eyes a loose cannon. Don't know if I said the last part right but you know what I mean, I hope.

Great chapters.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from grd
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Nice. Looking for the Council or government help soon for Buffy.
Review By [grd] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from dreameralways
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Still so very entertaining. Glad to see that you are adding to this again. Love it. Thank you.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from yuiop
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Nice. Glad to read more!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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welcome back. interesting update.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from AllenPitt
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the Council probably hasn't had time to react yet... plus they don't much care about individual slayers. One dies, they get another for free, right? And there's one active even if Buffy is in jail... Meanwhile she should wait until she heals up more. After all, no prison can hold her if she wants to get out (if she's at 100%) .
Faith probably isn't in the system anywhere- at a hotel under a fake name, not attending school, all that. All Joyce has to do is keep her mouth shut and ask for a lawyer--she likely won't be charged with anything. Maybe an illegal adoption? That'd be on Hank, though.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from burmafrdnow
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even a weakened Buffy is so much stronger and above all quicker that its no contest for a normal human no matter what skills they have. When your opponent can start her counter before you barely begin your move you have no chance. That is why humans fighting vampires hand to hand is just plain stupid. Have to laugh at the idea that any martial arts can make any real difference; martial arts relies on the ability to counter; when someone is that quick you cannot.


Yeah why is the Council so quiet? Their clout would have everyone backing off if they pushed it.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "9. You should get out more often" from Chan
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As well at least Buffy has the NCIS team's attention firmly on her and not looking for anyone else at the moment. although wonder whom's going to start putting the points together and get's 4.
Review By [Chan] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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I really hope you haven't abandoned such a promising idea right on the edge of amazing and scary things.

Please come back to this.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8. I’m so sorry, dad!" from spk
Review:
Heck of a place to leave it! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [1 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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