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Faith Malcovich, Biotic Supreme

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Review of chapter "Dream in a coma" from Kethric
Review:
So, a science fact point.

It takes light a few thousand years just to go from Earth to the nearest star system.

There are literally dozens of star systems within 5 parsecs (roughly 16 light years) of earth. Beyond that, I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
Very true. Alpha Centauri is about a hundred thousand light-years away (I'm probably wrong about the number).

I appreciate the fun science facts! Hope you like the story as it progresses!
Review By [Kethric] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dmitri
Review:
So far so good. I am really enjoying Faith's adventures towards her redemption.
Comments from author:
She was reincarnated in the Mass Effect universe. She died as Lehane in her coma, so...

You fill in the blanks.

P.S. I like the fact that you like my story.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [8 Jun 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cmiller
Review:
Okay... soo... Faith is a Commander but when will she end up crashing with Shepard or is she the fill in... no way that doesn't seem right? Also what's with the different names? I mean she said Lehane luck but the other's called her Commander Malcovich.

Anyway More please.
Comments from author:
She was reincarnated in the Mass Effect universe. She died as Lehane in her coma, so that's why she's now Malcovich.

Make sense?
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [8 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dream in a coma" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
congrats on graduating.
ME trilogy is a good buy, I heard that the DLC's aren't included but still a good buy.
interesting choice on Faith getting a new start.
keep it up and enjoy being a fully recognized member of society....

Now get a job you slacker (LOL) just kidding. its what everyone said to me when I graduated. breath and keep on writing.
Comments from author:
Will do! Thanks for the congratulations. Those are helpful, as are the encouragement. Can't wait to get out some more for people.

Oh yeah, and I got myself a job recently. As of 8/23, I have a job at Sonic! I love it!
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dream in a coma" from Cmiller
Review:
I'm intrigued. I'd like to see more.
Comments from author:
As do I. I have the beginnings of the next chapter already written. Can't wait to finish it.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [1 Jun 13] • Not Rated
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