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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
The cheese man?

Hmmm...

Sheogorath, is that you now?
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [17 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Hecatonchires
Review:
I think autocorrect got to Taren Ferry.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [16 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Traveler
Review:
This has the makings of a good story. Please continue.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [14 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JulesS
Review:
I absolutely love what you did with the characters. It's refreshing to see a recent contribution to WoT. I don't believe that it gets enough attention personally. I look forward to see where you take this.
Review By [JulesS] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from borgrabbit
Review:
I thought of a scene from Ren and Stimpy where Ren said "I'm the keeper of the cheese!".
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from borgrabbit
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Hope Dawn is still the Key. A lean green portal opening machine. Something that is new to the WOT series. ^.^

Looking forward to more.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [4 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Interesting start. I've only read the first of the Wheel of Time books and that was several years ago. I like the setting, I just didn't like some of the characters.

Just an FYI: Wheel of Time has its own category under Literature > Fantasy.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I couldn't find that link when I first posted this story.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jhor
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OMG! OK I'm not one to gush but just from this one chapter I am now dying to read the rest of this story. I love these books and I like what you have started please please please give us more! :)
Review By [jhor] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DragonBard
Review:
Interesting.

One thing I want to suggest is Dawn commenting on how there seems to be overlap between things from back home, and the WoT world.

Like Ogier and Ogre, Trolloc and Troll, etc.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gladius
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Nice beginning ... you managed to skip all the awkward, 'now I'm suddenly in a medieval world' stuff, but it doesn't seem rushed or perfunctory. There aren't enough WoT crossovers out there, keep it up! (Btw, I hope you don't make Dawn a channeler: it would be much more interesting if any powers she has are an OCP for the locals ...
Review By [Gladius] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alastor
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Very nice start so far, WoT has always been one of my favorite series and Dawn was one of my favorite and underused characters from Buffy so I will be very interested in where you go with this. Looking forward to more!
Review By [Alastor] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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