Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Ship of the Line: Xander Muyo

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from blackholelord
Review:
So you picked the moment of everyone from Tenchi Muyo did not know each other, let alone trust each other. Still its unique and wish you the best writing the story.
Review By [blackholelord] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from Orchamus
Review:
Story was a little crazy, but ultimately awesome as all hell. Loved the sheer chaos, though one wonders at the problems of sealing Ryoko when she was occupying Buffy's body, and how many shall keep the powers of their heritage.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from DieselDriver
Review:
Well so far this is really excellent. Hope you can find it in yourself to continue. I'm really looking forward to finding out what your vision of the merging of these two wildly different worlds will bring to Sunnyhell.
Comments from author:
I've gone through a bit of burn-out on the writing lately... but I hope to manage to power through it soon... I have several things I'd love to get back to, including this story!

Thanks for the encouragement.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holiday!" from DieselDriver
Review:
OMG!!! The thought of Buffy being Ryoko and Dawn being her spaceship is just amazingly funny. Very good combo there LOL. Also the thought of Buffy hanging on Xander like Ryoko does is also about the same level of hilariousness.

I have to wonder, will Dawn/Ryo-Oki be able to change forms during the event and what happens if she is in one of the changed forms when the spell ends?
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
awesome fic so far! hope it will be continued.`
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
I wonder, will Dawn-Ohki remain loyal to Ryoko/Buffy, or will she choose a new Captain? Do I even need to say that it will be Xander who she chooses. On a Slightly different subject, how will Joyce react to the changes her Little Girl?

TTFN
Comments from author:
Well, I don't see Dawn changing 'allegiances' from her sister to Xander... of course /all/ of the women in Tenchi are in love with Tenchi... =D Dawn claims 'dibs', but Willow definitely has a prior claim at this point... of course Dawn has a bit of a speech impediment thanks to Ethan's spell...

Miya!!!! *grrrrrr* ;)
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [18 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from valdimarian
Review:
Farscape is a good contemporary crossover for Buffy, especially with the similarity / total opposites of the Satedans (the Space Police in their sector) and the Tenchi world's Space Police.
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [8 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from branz
Review:
Why not try Gundam Seed?

if you have a few PLANTS colonies transported in through the spell it will go a long way to giving
you a fleet and construction facilities and new tech.

add in a few enemies from various tv shows, anime series, games
and movies you've got a foundation for a world.

EDIT: In terms of reaction time.. yes, instinctive knowledge of the mobile suit...no idea. as for giant robots it depends on which ones you use, remember Mobile Suits and Gundams are very different like a hummer compared to a tank, same basic idea, radically different in design and firepower.
Robotech, Code Geass, Mass effect, Chromehounds, Mechwarrior i would say would fit with gundam well, something in the style of Gurren lagann or Power rangers would not. If it seems cartoony in proportions, it probably wont fit, just my opinion.
Comments from author:
Interesting idea... I worry about using the Gundam's and other Giant Robots though...

Would slayers be considered Coordinators?
Review By [branz] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from Genuka
Review:
Masterful recreation of Halloween night! I can't wait for the next update!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I definitely did not want to do 'the usual'.

First, Ethan's spell grants Janus power over the night... Therefore, if no-one is in the position to end the spell, with Ethan being affected and unavailable to provide the information on how to do so, it makes sense that the spell would last until dawn. Second, I like the idea of turning one of the Scoobies on the others due to the effects of the costume, it makes for interesting fall-out. What's really fun is that the only person who actually knows what is going on is the last person anyone would expect... and she's too busy sharing with her possessor to try to change anything. Finally, changing the costumes changes the entirety of what happens that night because no-one reacts the same :)

If you're familiar with Tenchi Muyo OVA/Ryo-Ohki then you will somewhat recognize the state that Halloween leaves everyone in, namely the static positions roughly relating to the first several episodes of the series, with a couple exceptions.

Impacted characters will also significantly change the flow of things after Halloween as well. For example, with Spike now being Z, it is highly unlikely that he would be hiring the 'Order of Teraka' to take on Buffy... On the other hand, things like Ford and Kendra coming to town might still occur but with a different manner of playing out.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from tavinseven
Review:
This is interesting. I can't wait to see how everyone is affected by their costumes.
Comments from author:
Well, the rule of thumb is that they're going to maintain whatever powers their possessor's had as well as the memories of the characters up to the events portrayed, ie immediately prior to the Tenchi OVA/Ryo-Ohki series start as modified by the spell and its induced events.

Additionally, several interesting things have happened, including the merger of two vengeance demons and the disappearance of two key players. Plus Dawn's speech impediment and carrot craving.

I'm noodling chapter three now... starting off with a certain character who's presence might be unexpected... =D
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
*gives subtle 'Oz nod' to Bobboky*
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from Morgomir
Review:
Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Next up is a Buffyoko ghost, a fair bit of angst from an unlikely source... and a bit of screaming. ;)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from deamon
Review:
I vote for the crossover to be mass effect or star wars but from the sstar wars the old republic game. another funny one tho not a technical space cross would be the justice league lol.
Comments from author:
*nods* I've addressed the 'gaming' crossovers previously... namely I'm not one, so my familiarity there is 'Oh, that's a game title...'

Justice League might be interesting, but it would be a dimensional cross (keyness) instead of an 'in universe' cross. To start of, my primary cross structure is going to be Men In Black, which should allow me to bring in lots of fun crosses within that universe thanks to some things about the movies... (Like Lucas and Spielberg being on the 'monitored aliens wall') ;)
Review By [deamon] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from sorawithans
Review:
Buffy and Willow are missing, will probably be very cranky when let out. If Xander gives Buffy the gems in Tenchi-ken, we will have another candidate for light-hawk wings.

Can't wait for crazy, totally expect K and J to take a road trip to pester them about secrecy rules.
Comments from author:
Not sure about cranky... :) Haven't decided yet.

Yeah, we have a spaceship falling out of the sky over Sunnydale... Methinks K and J might notice.
Review By [sorawithans] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Need for a Holy Man!" from Martin
Review:
Introducing that many people in a short chapter was a mistake, because it just became a confusing mess. And I have watched some of the Tenchi animes.
Comments from author:
Sorry you feel that way Martin.

On the other hand, it was Halloween night and chaos ruled. If I didn't make you feel like things were total chaos, then I failed as an writer. I'm sorry if you were expecting me to say 'and chaos happened' and be satisfied that it would be 'sufficient' for my story plans.
Review By [Martin] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 5 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking