Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Rewinding The Clock For The Fate Of All

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Gotcha" from Morgomir
Great story so far. Keep up the good work. Minor spelling and grammar errors throughout.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Going Going Gotcha" from grd
So glad to see Bruce being part of this. It would be funny if afterwards he meets Sherlock Holmes or recruits him too. If that is you have Holmes part if this too. Modern Sherlock with Benedict Cumberbach. Very cool twist.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training and Mainly Mishaps" from sajuuk
hello lol
i love this story so far
it is very good and have a lot of comic
but what about the avengers, the xmen, the ligue of justice, Spiderman and other super team ???
also you was speaking of rachni so what about the reaper and other species from mass effect ???? (and what about their technology)
also all of the people speak of race know in there galaxy of the univers but what about the others galaxy ????
what happening to the jedi ??? and how the different magic univers mix ?? like Harry potter and magical nanoha or fate stay night or others like zatanna's magic world ???
also how are the Citizen ?? have the medecine, the school and civil tech better or have they more death and crime ???
are people of game, novel, anime and film answer if something like their dream can be do with their tech
for exemple tank and other unit from independance day, command & conquer, supreme commander or starcraft ???
or super soldier from halo, crysis, vanquish and section 8 ???
or mecha like in gundam seed, gundam age 3, gundam 00 or other mecha anime like robotech ???
or ship like in game like homeworld series, nexus, haegemonia or robotech no ???
i think that jack would like the new and the scientist would have new research and tech to use
but i think also that they can creat mobile shipyard for the futur and also more powerfull and interresting cityship with new shields, weapons, drone, shipyard and usine no ??
can they add ki, magic and the force in their ship ???
and please let they prepare for some univers like warhammer 40 000 or more bloodier
i think they can prepare for Aliens or zerg or tyrannides
also can they creat their android, cybord like in metal gear and other stuff
please write more and a lot
ps : please anwer me
Comments from author:
Wow, a lot of questions. glad you like it.
The Avengers,X-men, Justice League, Spiderman and other superheroes will become involved, I have a lot of ideas about this fic but getting them out and into order is not easy. I have rough plans for the next 4 chapters , 2 of which will deal with the magicals and the superhero groups while the other 2 will deal with subplots like the terrorists who side with lucifer or plans that lucifer has or will be inacting and who he might be using.
There have been mentions of medical breakthroughs and such but such things will be only be touched on now and again. While i won't be adding race's all the time , I will be mentioning them here and there. Don't forget that there are multiple realities to draw from and that the story is open for other authors to add to the story as they wish.
There will be bad guys and good guys to deal with when they finally get out into the realities to begin the battles to save the local cluster and all of the multiverse. There is also the fact that time inside the sphere (Tikva) is moving forward at a very fast and accelerated rate, a thousand or hundred thousand or even a million years could go by inside but only a few seconds would pass for the rest of the multiverse.
I have played Command & Conquer, Supreme Commander and Starcraft and already have plans to use some of the weapons from the games in further chapters and as for the super soldiers issue, well, everyone will be getting upgrades (its mentioned already in a previous chapter in conversation) , think about it, humans and the other races being as strong as Kryptonians and Saiyans with all of their skills capable of doing magic to boot.
I already had Harry Potter mention using magic in ship construction and there is more to come there as well.
There is still a lot to go into it and a long way to go with other authors adding their own spin, hopefully it will grow as others add their own twist and subplots.
Just watch and see, which is what I am doing as I continue to write the story so far.
Review By [sajuuk] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training and Mainly Mishaps" from aeraveil
Pride and greed. Out of all of the sins, those two are the most insidious. And the chief weapons of the adversary eh?
Comments from author:
very true
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [30 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jack's Dilemma and Unruly Children" from grd
Jack is having way too much fun. Nice job with the ascended. Love the planning and cultural clashes.
Comments from author:
yep, and things are going to start accelerating in the next few chapters.
Review By [grd] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oops" from MageMan
your doing too much telling and not enough showing. let's see the characters interact with each other, get some dialog going please.
Review By [MageMan] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oops" from grd
Had me worried there for a moment. Are you including Ender from Ender's Game here? Wonder what he would have done?
Comments from author:
nope, i won't be adding him, even though i have not read the books he looks interesting as a character.
Review By [grd] • Date [20 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Freedom, Friends and Forgiveness" from Doodle
Excellent chapter. 2,000/10

I noticed you said Halfbloods in one of the chapters within the last few chapters(Buffy and co's chapter), can I assume that you are going to include the characters from PJO/HOO reality? If so, how are they handling everything that's happened/happening and the fact that they could potentially be closer to their parents and maybe be raised by them in the future? How is the rest of the population handling the fact that there are actual Gods and Goddesses among them? How does this whole situation effect Zeus' law about not interacting with their children?
Comments from author:
Yea , if i can i will be including them all, just need to squeeze them in, lol , and all of that about Gods walking around among the mortals will be be dealt with in later chapters and as for Zeus and his law, its gone by the wayside on orders from his boss, its something that will be addressed in a later chapter. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Queen of the Slayers?" from grd
Klingons and Slayers? The Galaxy will shake with their union. Very interesting development. Enjoyed their elevation and reunions.
Comments from author:
Klingons and Slayers together will be a lot of fun, lol. As for the Slayer elevation, who better than those who experienced the PTB's screwup to take over in their stead.

(edit)Wait till the demons find out later about whats happened with the Slayers, lmao.
Review By [grd] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Queen of the Slayers?" from aeraveil
Hurr, I'll think about it. If I come up with something, I'll let you read it first before I post anything, that way it won't conflict with whatever you have going.
Comments from author:
Dont worry about having me read it before hand, there's plenty of space and multipile versions of each character floating around (multi-reality) so there won't be any conflict and if there is a hic-up, it can be easily written around or included in some way. Hope you join in the fun anyway.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Ascended Plains or This plain sucks" from aeraveil
You do have to put the Time-lords in there somewhere. They're sort of higher beings in a sense or at least an 'elder race'. Out of all of them, the most decent ones are probably the doctor and the Master and yes, I'm putting the Master on the side of decency. It's not a long stretch, considering how screwed up their ruler was at the end.
Comments from author:
I never thought about adding the Time Lords, they never actually crossed my mind. I do think that the Time Lords (as a race) come across as more arrogant than the ascended races from time to time but the idea does have merit. If someone wants to add them, feel free to do so as the realities are numerous to choose from.
if you want to join in and write them into the fic, fire ahead (don't forget that this is an open fiction, anyone can add chapters) as i will have my hands full as it is with completing the introductions of some of the races involved and their preperations before I start on the opening of the war.

(edit) just had a realisation, it could tie in quite well with the fact (that the new citizens of Tikva will eventually realise) that the Dyson sphere exists at the same coords in all realities in the cluster at the same time.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Setting the stage" from Irishgrace
Really good so far, can't wait to continue reading.
Comments from author:
glad you enjoy it , happy reading.
Review By [Irishgrace] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shakespeare Got it Wrong" from MageMan
The paragraphs are a bit too big because you don't break after some one says something. There for the paragraphs look like they are wall of text.
Comments from author:
Hmmm! I had thought that I had the spacing set right, looks like they need some more work then, time for some re-editing, cheers for the input.
Review By [MageMan] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shakespeare Got it Wrong" from grd
Loved Murphy. Was Zarek really that bad? Not a fan of the BSG remake. Good to see the Kryptonians represented. Wonder what Batman thinks of all this or was he reunited with his parents too.
Comments from author:
I haven't really got that far with my notes concerning bats, I'm actually in two minds on what to do with his parents, either to have it so they died in every reality or they survived in some. as for Murphy, wait till He, Loki and Janus start to plot together. chaos cubed ,, lmao..
Review By [grd] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Setting up Camp" from MageMan
It might be a good story but, i cant get past how you formated the paragraphs.
Comments from author:
well, like I stated in the beginning of the fic , its my first attempt at writing , for me its learn as i go along , but you haven't said whats exactly wrong with their format.
Review By [MageMan] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Page: 1 of 2 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking