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Review of chapter "part 2" from Sanabalis
Review:
Nice story! I like seeing the confused Angel. It's time for others to be cryptic, around him! :P
Review By [Sanabalis] • Date [5 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from sprig
Review:
lol now this is really interesting. can't wait to see how the new Xander and Harmony work out with everybody else.
Review By [sprig] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and conceived history of The Fall.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from Bobboky
Review:
Cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part 2" from darkk
Review:
love it man ,keep it up ,i cant wait for MORE!!
Review By [darkk] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Hmm, very interesting chapter...very, very interesting.
Thanks!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 2" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Interesting story. It"s starting to develop nicely now that we're in Chapter 2. Regarding the choppy scene changes noted in another review or two, you might want to consider putting some sort of visual indicator of a scene break. Some people need the cue or they get thrown off and yah, you missed a comma in the 1st sentence. It is still good, please continue.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leonamasha
Review:
Love it! The way you're showing how Xander's personality has changed and hinting at what changes he's already done. Goodness, people tend to make that Hunter in the series a Rogue but now you're taking it to a completely different path. Definitely looking forward to more! Thanks for posting!!
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [13 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
*cackle* No matter what universe or time Xander is still a chaos magnet and avatar of change.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rod
Review:
Sorry, no. This is very bitty, the scenes are too short, and the scene changes are positively ninja-like in their stealth skills. It's all too confusing to read. Add to that an opening sentence that would have been a comma splice if only it had a comma, and I just couldn't push myself very far through. Sorry, but it doesn't work for me.
Review By [Rod] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
BWAH-HAHAHA!!! It is enough to disrupt even teen angst! More, please!?!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
"Xander Harris sat at the bar in front of him as a soda."

You really need to rephrase this thing.

It sounds like Xander shapechanged himself into a soda and is sitting on a bar in front of someone.

Hope no one decides to drink him, please be safe Xander!
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting start to the story.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wedge
Review:
I like the premise, but your writing is so disorganized I couldn't tell what was happening. This read more like a series of disconnected scenes than a story.
Review By [wedge] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [1 out of 10]
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