Review of chapter "Chapter Four V2" from Vianca
Much better, though if I was Laundry, I would still be a bit wary.
I would also hold quite a lot back.
See it like this, to Laundry, Robotech Earth is just some newly found planet with a culture slightly above Earth´s norm (if you forget the SGC).
Then think on how they treated similar planets?
Finding out if the Antarctica Outpost is there, is step one, step two is checking it and bringing it online for a network check, in order to detect the other outposts still working.
That would give them the all they need for Atlantis & it´s sister ship, The Tower.
Why that wreck?
With it, you got a place to relocate that super-volcano shipyard to, as in rebuilding The Tower into a shipyard-ship.
This page might help you, if you ever let them play with cityship designs.http://www.its.caltech.edu/
As for my last review and what I meant with them playing/acting International-Resque/Thunderbirds?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-YyTfxeJxvQhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2K9rVRuehGU
O and some fun stuff.http://www.startrek.com/article/nasas-latest-warp-drive-design-looks-very-familiar
As for the ATA-gen, what about the retro-virus?
Review By [Vianca
] • Date [23 Jun 14] • Not Rated