Review of chapter "The Boy That Brought the Thunder" from purrfus
Found this because I saw a newer story from you with a recent update and decided to check out more of your work.
Interesting mixture of perspectives. It was just a bit confusing when Solomon spoke and Xander didn't react. After I re-read it a couple of times I decided you intended him to be speaking to Billy internally, which is something I hadn't seen or heard about the character before.
Comments from author:
When I wrote this story I hadn't read any comics where Captain Marvel was more than a secondary character. As far as I could tell at the time Billy does get more than impressions at times, but the others couldn't hear it.
Also it's one of my early stories, so it's a bit more rough around the edges than what I'd post now.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Boy That Brought the Thunder" from SamJames
Billy's a good choice for this since he is not a superhero himself, but a person who can turn himself into someone else who is a super hero. So his take on what ordinary people can do was interesting.
Review By [SamJames
] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated