Review of chapter "Epilogue and Story Notes" from Kiwikatipo
That was a great story, very sad ending even with inspirational epilogue but then what else could it be?
I loved Freaks and Geeks and enjoyed your fine writing in bringing Lindsay's personality to life as an early nineteen eighties slayer.
My only nitpick was your layout, have you ever read your story on someone else's computer? Do it and you'll see what I mean.
Thank you for finishing this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I'm sorry about the layout problems I had with the last few chapters. I figured out how to fix it, so it should be easier on the eyes now.
Review By [Kiwikatipo
] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]