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Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from serenityselena
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oh my ....
from the future? .... what an intriguing fact ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from Genuka
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If this is done you might want to mark it...
Review By [Genuka] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from QOShea
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There has to be more of this! Please?
Review By [QOShea] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from apollo
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You demoted Jack at the beginning of his fic. Jack was a full Colonel from the start of the show to the beginning of Season 8, where he was promoted to Brigadier General (1 star). General Hammond was always a Major General (2 stars), and Carter started at Captain, before being promoted to (in order) Major (Season 3), Lieutenant Colonel (Season 8), and finally Colonel (Atlantis Season 4). FYI, ranks for commissioned officers in both the Army and the Air Force (and I believe Marines as well) is as follows, in ascending order from the lowest.

2nd Lieutenant (single Gold bar)
1st Lieutenant (single Silver bar)
Captain (double Silver bars)
Major (Gold Oak Leaf)
Lieutenant Colonel (Silver Oak Leaf)
Colonel (Eagle) (side note: their insignia is why they are sometimes referred to as "Bird" Colonels, or being a "full bird")
Brigadier General (1 star)
Major General (2 stars)
Lieutenant General (3 stars)
General (4 stars)
General of the Air Force [or Army] (5 stars)

Either of the first two may be referred to as simply "Lieutenant" just as either of the Colonel ranks can be simply called "Colonel" and any of the five General ranks may be called "General."

However, the story as a whole is good, and your premise is very interesting.
Review By [apollo] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from spring
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^_^ wonderful
Review By [spring] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from SpacedCadet
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More please!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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“A greater proof of your courage and endurance would be difficult to envisage, AlexanderLavelleHarris. Teal’c said.

*snicker*

Loved the end.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from mercifulblack
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I love this series
Review By [mercifulblack] • Date [18 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from Difdi
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I really like the story and characterizations.

But the technology depicted is a bit jarring. First, the bullets in use by the SGC don't have iron in them. At all. Tin, copper, lead, perhaps some teflon, but not iron. Brass being a close relative of bronze, that bronze sword should have been stopped by anything that stops the metals found in bullets. Second, while it's easier for a ferrous material to be affected by a magnetic field, magnetism is not quite so limited. With the right kind of magnetic field at the right intensity, almost *any* metal can be affected. Third and lastly, it would be a bit more plausible to make the shield resistant to electrical energy, superheated plasma and highly energetic kinetic attacks. That way a sword or stake for that matter, regardless of material, would work where bullets, zats and staff weapons just slide off (this is similar to the type of shield you see in Dune).
Review By [Difdi] • Date [24 Feb 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from aislinnrae
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I really liked this. It's a shame you didn't continue =\
Review By [aislinnrae] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from (Past Donor)ApocSM
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WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!
Review By [(Past Donor)ApocSM] • Date [3 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from banner
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* giggle *
"There can be only one!"
* giggle *
Review By [banner] • Date [1 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from Elleria
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Daniel is Imortal!!!! Interesting...Loving this story so far. Update soon please.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrivals 1" from JasminG
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Really enjoyed reading this, very entertaining and would certainly like to read a lot more PLEASE. Janice.
Review By [JasminG] • Date [8 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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