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Dragonball Z - Spoiled Brat's Birthday Present

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Review of chapter "Epilogue: Satan Does It Again" from Harry
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I have to agree with the Z fighters: Satan NEVER LEARNS! He still needs to hog the credit, make the world think that he is the best. Sooner or later, the Z fighters WILL get their recognition though!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act Six: Super Saiyan Emergence" from Harry
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OH YEAH! Gohan may not have been able to go to SS2, but Trunks could AND DID! Now, NOW its SHOWTIME!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act Five: The Tides Turn and Turn" from Harry
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Well, now we know why Bojack was able to hold off Gohan. But, those tactics won't work against 18. And I also suspect that its going to be time to finish off Bojack once and for all before long!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act Four: The Battle against Bojack" from Harry
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So, something is preventing Gohan from going to SS2, eh? Sounds like there is more going on here than meets the eye! Time to find out and soon.
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act Three: Finale on Battle Island 2" from Harry
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Well, now we know who is behind all these attacks on the Z Warriors. If that is the case, then all the training that Xander has put them through had better pay off! They are going to need it!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act Two: The Semifinals" from Harry
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Mr. Satan is out of luck. Its time for the Semi-Finals and eventually, Satan is going to LOOSE! Time to admit old chap, you are NOT the greatest fighter!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Act One: The Competition Begins" from Harry
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Well, those of us who know the show, KNOW why Satan is acting the way he is. HE IS SCARED! He knows that any one of them can kick his rear end and he just doesn't want the public to know it.
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: The Competition Is Called" from Harry
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I KNEW that the world thought that Hercule aka Mr. Satan saved the world, but to BELIEVE if after so long is RIDICULOUS! Its time the Sayians came in and showed him what TRUE ability is!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Satan Does It Again" from Vilkath
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I don't really know what to say about this story, I would normally not say anything but this story has no reviews at all I felt I had to say something.

The initial Buffy Z story was cool, interesting and Deep. It had some errors but over all was pretty well written. This how ever seems to be hard to read, half the effort dribble. I can not really place what format it is written in, I would like to say script format or something. But over all it detracts immensely from the enjoyment of the story.

If this was an authors first attemp at a story I could understand and just go with having a good idea. But this is a huge step backwards from the skill, effort and greatness of the authors other works.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [2 out of 10]
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