Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Sdarian
A big issue with this, is that Xander was with Anya in fifth season. So having him pine after Buffy is rather wrong. It wouldn't be too bad if Buffy was just one name along with Anya, Willow and Dawn as he would miss all of them. But only having Buffy and that bit at the end about betraying her really just doesn't make any sense as he was never involved with her.
Review By [Sdarian
] • Date [16 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from nerfherder
You did a really good job on this. Better, I think than the replacement batter did on the last two. Why did you stop?
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
this story is excellent and i hope for more someday
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Elleria
This is very good. Looking forward to seeing where you go next.
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [28 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of story "Asha'man Harris" from Anonymous Reviewer
The story is a very good start. I feel as though you were rushing through the story. I think think it would be nice if you took your time with each chapter. You have a good grip on the wheel of time folks though. How come Xander isn't going nuts? I understand that happens to men who can hold the power? All in all a good start. Please contiue the story. Don't let the lack of reviews (positive or not) stop you from writing. Unless it isn't fun anymore, then screw it ;+>
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment