Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from nerfherder
You did a really good job on this. Better, I think than the replacement batter did on the last two. Why did you stop?
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
this story is excellent and i hope for more someday
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Elleria
This is very good. Looking forward to seeing where you go next.
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [28 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of story "Asha'man Harris" from Anonymous Reviewer
The story is a very good start. I feel as though you were rushing through the story. I think think it would be nice if you took your time with each chapter. You have a good grip on the wheel of time folks though. How come Xander isn't going nuts? I understand that happens to men who can hold the power? All in all a good start. Please contiue the story. Don't let the lack of reviews (positive or not) stop you from writing. Unless it isn't fun anymore, then screw it ;+>
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment