Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AnFan
Just found these two stories and decided to take interest in them. I'm not sure I like the premise for this second one. I haven't seen many stories I liked that brought Big Bads from a crossover into the canon side. Usually because the author doesn't integrate the back story for the Big Bads well. I hope this will be an exception to that. I will give you cheers if you do it well. It's much easier to drop a Hero into a story and modify the situations around their impact than it is to move large chunks of canon into a new story line. Mainly because it throws off the character interactions because the normal main plot characters get thrown onto a back foot and never seem to get back an even keel. Hopefully with Xander's knowledge this will work out. And there is a good possibility for character interaction to be interesting and engaging with the "old gang" trying to integrate Xander into the group again and get him to fit in with everyone.
I've enjoyed reading these two so far, so I have absolutely no problem with your writing skills. I hope your story telling skills are up for the challenge and that the Muse is kind and visits often :)
Review By [AnFan
] • Date [11 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from tchizek
Great but I wish you could continue it.
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [15 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from nerfherder
And again, Da-Amn! Any chance of resolving this little crisis?
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Dragonelf
I hope you get inspired to continue this story.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
so cool, so needing a 4th chapter
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SamDragon
Very good.Next chapter please.
Review By [SamDragon
] • Date [19 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Elleria
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [28 Sep 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "Warrior of Truth" from Anonymous Reviewer
Man it was just getting good! It is totally unfair that you haven't given us another chapter. Just a couple of questions; how come the SPD know all about the slayer, why did the police just accept Xander just like that, and why isn't Xander nuts? I asked that question before but He's been channeling the power for ten years. Has the sourse for men become untainted? Otherwise, it's still very promising.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment