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Review of chapter "Part 3" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful story!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from mendal
Review:
Besides his powers did Xander keep any knowledge of advanced technology from the CCW?
Comments from author:
A very good question, and one that will be addressed in the following stories.
Review By [mendal] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from trongod
Review:
Let's see, you killed both Cordelia and Willow, and Xander and the rest have yet to discover this...

Does anyone /really/ think the not so nice entities of SunnyHell, human and otherwise, will survive him finding this out? Or even the town itself?
Comments from author:
A lot of people are going to be worrying about Xander's reactions, once Willow's and Cordelia's fates become known. And they won't be just Giles, Buffy and Angel. ;-(
Review By [trongod] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from DragonBard
Review:
Considering Willow was Xander's best friend, I would have thought there'd have been more of a reaction since she's obviously dead.

Not happy she and Cordy died either.
Comments from author:
Well, no one is certain of her fate at this point in time. They just know she's currently missing and since Buffy's situation was, quite literally, critical, Xander and Giles were focusing on that. I'm currency working on the next story in this series, and expect it'll be ready to post soon.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Gideon
Review:
For a few chapters I was afraid you were going to kill off all the scoobies, Buffy by car accident, Willow by Vampire and Xander by by deep space suffocation. I'm glad to see that Buffy is recovering and Xander is unharmed and Dawn is still herself, even if there is more of herself than there was a few days before. And Lady Buffy proved there was good reason for her to be scared of cars didn't she?
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed the story.

There will be more to come, it's just a matter of getting the other stories written.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Genuka
Review:
Great story. I only wish that you'd expand it out to its much larger potential.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and that last part is entirely up to my muse's whims.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from CageFire
Review:
An interesting fic, if not a bit short. Although I know little of the series it was based on, so I don't know where it could have gone. It was unfortunate about willow and cordy. I do wonder what was the point of it, perhaps you needed to get rid of those characters for some future plans that didn't pan out? *shrug* Anyway, pretty decent.
Comments from author:
Rifts is not a series, but a role-playing game with a number of world settings to choose from, if you'd like to customize your game to a particular theme.

As far as the girls' deaths are concerned, the basic challenge was to write a Halloween fic with significant changes from canon, that would have far reaching consequences.

I felt that Willow and Cordelia getting killed would have even more major effects down the timeline than simply having Buffy killed off would produce, since each of them were responsible for a number of far-reaching consequences.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from LordSia
Review:
Oh, nice. Like it, will you continue or just leave it at that?
Comments from author:
I'm undecided at this point, since I have a couple ideas about how to proceed, but my muse has been ignoring most of my WIPs. ;-(
Review By [LordSia] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Riniko
Review:
Fairly well written story. There were points that pulled from my enjoyment, the casual way that Willows death was taken being one. There was no mention of her after her death, for someone else that close to Xander to disappear was a little much. Even Cordelia's death was only a passing thing. If those aspects had been better addressed the story would be much more believable and enjoyable. Still a good story and hope you write more.
Comments from author:
Sorry to take so long to get back, but I've been traveling and had limited 'net access.

As far as Willow's death is concerned, I was intending (and still intend) to write a follow-up story that would focus on how her death affects Xander, but my muse hasn't consented to do anything more than the first few lines of said story. Hopefully, she'll change her mind soon, and you'll see the story sometime in the near future. ;-(

All I can say about Xander's behavior in the story was that he compartmentalizing his feelings and dealing with events on a level of priority basis, and since Buffy was still alive, but seriously injured, he was focusing on doing what he needed to do to keep her alive and help her get healed.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [10 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from wjenks
Review:
The only complaint I've got is that You killed Willow and Xander isn't reacting in any way to the death of his oldest friend. I hope you will explain this reaction in further chapters.:( other than that great story so far thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
Actually, none of the Scoobies are aware of Willow's and Cordy's deaths at this point in time. All they really know is that both girls are unaccounted for at the moment.

I had planned to cover these points in a follow-up story, but I just might revise that last chapter to address this point, since it doesn't appear that my muse is interested in cooperating on working on the vague ideas I had for a sequel. ;-(
Review By [wjenks] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from (Past Donor)Keldin
Review:
I'm kind of wondering what happened to Willow. The last actual appearance of her is at the end of Chapter 1, where her body is being drained and her immaterial form vanishes. I know Giles said that some people died, but if Willow was one of them, there should be more comment than that. If Willow *wasn't* one of them... well, why isn't anyone looking for her if she isn't there?

That said, I got more than a bit of pleasure at watching Anise get slapped down. She *always* annoyed me. But then, that was kind of the point, neh?
Comments from author:
Unfortunately, Willow died when that vampire stumbled across her body and drained her. I didn't focus on her death after Xander returned to town because eh was more concerned with helping Giles to figure out how best to help save Buffy. Her death will not be ignored, but will be addressed when I eventually get around to writing a follow-up to this.

And Willow's death will be just one of the factors that will be motivating Xander's actions when he starts trying to figure who's responsible for the events of Halloween, but it will be one of the MAJOR factors driving him.

And as far as Anise is concerned, my muse thinks Arrogant Alien Chick's sole purpose for existence is to get bitch-slapped as frequently as possible. ;-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Keldin] • Date [7 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from GundumM
Review:
nice. and needs more chapters
Comments from author:
An idea for a sequel is floating around the back of brain, but it's not solid enough to work on, yet. Maybe sometime in the future.
Review By [GundumM] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Vornae
Review:
Grey any chance of more of this story line or was this it.
Comments from author:
I've got a general idea of what's next. Just have to find the time to write it.
Review By [Vornae] • Date [5 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from JaredDrake
Review:
Cool, cool. One thing, Willow Dead???
Comments from author:
Yes, quite definitely. More on that in a follow-up story.
Review By [JaredDrake] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Tanydwr
Review:
Cool.
I love the fact that Buffy's injuries came not from the noblewoman's foolishness, but her attempts to take care of the kids. The tracking says I have read this, but to be honest, I don't recall doing so!
Awesome. I love Hallowe'en fics (as you may've guessed, having read my challenge!).
Lol, Tanydwr
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I'm always glad to see what my readers think of my stories.
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [6 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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