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Review of chapter "The Death of the...." from Eljin
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this is fantastic!
your portrayal of how the heroes react to the sheer concept of the extended consequences of their actions and inactions is brilliant.
i understand why the heroes dont kill off repeat offenders in the comics, but im sure in reality eventually an aggrieved family member would have gone punisher on the villans or a rich enuf one would have hired someone(s) to assassinate them.
Review By [Eljin] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Death of the...." from Mamodo
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You know what I would love? A Sequel of sorts where Dawn (maybe together with Faith) show up and shake everything even more up.
I think Bruce would simply LOVE *snicker* to learn that it's not a Xander-thing but common to his friends as well to stand their ground no matter what.
And Dawn key-ness should help her travel to him without problems.
Plus, I'm pretty sure that she won't be happy when she finds out, that her sister and Willow drove Xan not only away, but really really far away.
I see fireworks. ^.^
Comments from author:
lol, you obviously haven't read the sequel yet.
Review By [Mamodo] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Death of the...." from SilverWave
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Great story,

Like this take on DC morality :-)

Thanks.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Visitors" from cwolf
Review:
Never noticed before. But it is slightly odd to me that Ares blessed it too. But, outside of the times he's an enemy he's been neutral in DC, so I guess it makes sense.
Comments from author:
Ares is... himself in DC. Besides, even he has to respect the warrior part of Xander, the one that won't leave someone on the battlefield not to mention the respect for a man fighting with the slayer. In mythology, he was a god of war, not cruelty like many people make him.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Death of the...." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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A very good tale that knocks the crap out of PC comics. I like the changes you made and hope to see more original writing like this in the future.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Death of the...." from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Wow, great story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [30 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Death of the...." from ashez
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Awww, he never got to meet Ted Kord. That makes me sad.
Review By [ashez] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Death of the...." from SledgeHammer
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The final Joke has been played - and it's on the Joker himself. The Joker learned the lesson - at the cost of his life - that Batman and even Supes *should* have the night they came and harangued Xander, only to get headed off at the pass by not even one hundred pounds of horked-off teenage Slayer, and a fully-protective mode Xander. Think - he moved the Man of Steel as if he were the Man of Styrofoam. (Batman is lucky he hasn't sparred with Xander in protect-the-girls mode; I don't think that WayneCorp has enough medical personnel to repair the body damage that Protector!Xander could inflict.) Artemis' message to Diana is starting to sink in, as are the results of Zatanna's research. (Think "The One".) Naturally, Xander himself has nary a clue.
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Death of the...." from VillageOrchid
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A little bit of a sense of what happened in that movie when real people went to a 1950s television series world. The people of the DC world you "made" never thought that they were comic book characters or pulp heroes. Overall good stuff. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Visitors" from VillageOrchid
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I'm enjoying the new ground... including Xander's adult female friends. It's not clear which one he will end up with, but fun to see the possibilities begin to develop.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The start of everything" from VillageOrchid
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I like how Xander got her the WW stuff -- just for her.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making a List, Checking it twice" from VillageOrchid
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Continuing to enjoy this... liking the stat about fewer slayers in the population, but still so many countries and areas to get them from.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Repurcussions Part 1" from VillageOrchid
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I never got this far in your story before, and am enjoying the forward progress. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood" from VillageOrchid
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Xander needs some solace. But good job on the angst.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from VillageOrchid
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I can see that the stress that Xander was under left him punchy enough to not be careful. LOL for the second time around (I think I first read this chapter when you posted it).
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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