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Review of chapter "The White What?" from ArinnaBlack
Review:
This got a giggle out of me. ^_^
Review By [ArinnaBlack] • Date [6 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The White What?" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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yaaaaay! Just found this! Such a fun bit that is sorely needed ;) The super-xander fics an be exasperating :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The White What?" from KzintiKiller
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Loved it. Generally speaking I dislike super-Xander stories, because they usually exist for two purposes. To kill Angel, and make Xander Buffy's equal or greater in power so he can get in her pants. To me that's (pardon the pun) pounding a square peg into a round hole. That's not to say that there aren't some good "powered up Xander" stories. The "Terran Jedi" stories spring to mind. He's still Xander, and what abilities he has, he has to work for. He's forced to grow up, but he remains Xander....and notably he isn't sniffing around Buffy like a desperate crushing high school boy.

A really good example of an "normal" but very effective Xander lives in the "Father Goose" stories.

Anyway, well done....and funny as hell.

KK
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [21 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The White What?" from DHX
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I actually don't find this funny.

why?

because it's to damn short to get into. could off been fun if it was longer.
Review By [DHX] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The White What?" from SpinelessPunster
Review:
Almost perfect.

Did you include Super Sayain ( not that it matters, snort!)

I take it back, it's perfect fanfic parody.

canon xander is soo very much a product of writers laughing at themselves quite often, as well as writers giving a boost of common sense to some of the other characters. often alternating one after the other. he's a great sounding board, and of course he's got geeky caring and endless loyalties. Of course, he always let's one loyalty damage another one, since without a lot of wisdom and experience, he's always misjudging and leaping to conclusions to further the metaphors --oops I meant .

No, It's metaphor. Hell, even Joss has said it. Just listen to the commentaries. heh

Still, funiest short one I've encountered for a long time.

And Buffy smacks Angel for continuity like a 120 lb mackerel. Those characters make little to no sense, quite often.
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The White What?" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
*gigglesnort* Thank you, I needed that laugh!

*is not a Super!Xander fan*
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The White What?" from Fionfee
Review:
*giggle* That was cute. :)
Review By [Fionfee] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The White What?" from Hoplite
Review:
I would rate this as a short joke which was very clever and funny.

I was originally suspicious of the small word count, but it was certainly worth reading.

There are many stories involving Xander in which the only thing you recognise about the character is the name.

As another reviewer has said, the main use of Xander should be his vulnerability and humanity. Xander is a very useful tool to add normality to an otherwise abnormal environment, but Xander is unfortunately not used in this way.

You should do another one about Willow. She is also used out of context.
Review By [Hoplite] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The White What?" from arkeus
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well, i meant the fact that you "kill" everyone off quite suddenly, wich makes the end of the fic...special enough to be considered weird by the conventional. like me :p the people who likes end that finishes well. and not just the end either, certain fics have so much torture and darkness in it that they are quite hard to read.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [15 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The White What?" from arkeus
Review:
Snicker. kind of right, i don't understand most super xander sotry. not that they are bad- they just stretch belief. and here is maybe the only fic of yours i can read, seeing the weird end of epigoni.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. So far as Epigoni goes, however, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by 'weird end.'
Review By [arkeus] • Date [15 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The White What?" from Dragonhulk
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As someone who writes 'super Xander stories' let me just say that this made me laugh. Some people get carried away at times (my self included) and its nice to read a story every now and then that points that out.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [22 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The White What?" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [21 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The White What?" from justaguy
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That was a perfect little antidote to all those super-xander stories. I love Xander but so many authors seem to forget that what makes him special is his humanity, his normality. When you make him on par or more powerful than all the other characters then the very thing that makes him stand out goes away.

Xander doesn't help because he's got superpowers. He helps because he doesn't.
Review By [justaguy] • Date [21 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The White What?" from MagnusXXN
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LoL.




): )
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [21 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The White What?" from YLeeFranklin
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Oh, THANK YOU, thank you, thank you! For saying (actually writing) what has been bugging the heck out of me for the longest time. Every time I catch one of those "Buffy is the true evil of the universe and Xander is a God and perfect and always right and can do this and this and This! and we should all bow down to every one of his judgement from on high", I have this overwhelming urge to not read any more fan fiction for this fandom. And possibly barf. Which is very bad because it is my one of my absolute favorite fandoms and has some absolutely incredible fanfic writers. I also wonder if the writer has actually SEEN any of the shows. I like, love and sometime hate the Xander from the show all at the same time. He could do some incredibly sweet and wonderful things and then he can turn around and do something that makes me want to bounce his head off a wall (not that I would ever do something like that, but you know the urge)! Sort of like a real man. Probably why we love him. Ordinary Guy Xander. Turn him into Always-Right-God-Xander, and he's not the same. I really appreciated the breath of fresh air. Thanks.
Review By [YLeeFranklin] • Date [21 Nov 05] • Not Rated
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