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Review of chapter "So it begins" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Damn. A good story that became great the more that was written. Really, really wish there was more of this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from eriktheviking
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Still a great (re)read.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Traveler
Review:
A good story that I have read several times. You stated there would be a Faith/Xander paring in later chapters. Now all most six years have gone by since your last update. I hope its time for those later chapters posted here or on FanFiction. Thanks for what you have written so far.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from (Past Donor)wolframhart
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Just finished reading what you have written here. Really enjoyed it, right up to your cliff hanger. Then I saw the date of your last update. Arrgh. I suppose six years later it is unlikely you will update but just know there is a least one person who hopes you do.
Review By [(Past Donor)wolframhart] • Date [30 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Piterio
Review:
Okay this just blow my mind. This story is great some point that might need improvement but that not really matter. What can i say, i love this story. I sure would love to read more of it. Shame it unfinished but oh well.
Review By [Piterio] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Meldarion
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I really liked reading the story. But it ends just when the story was picking up momentum.
Is this story abandoned or is Real Life being a bitch.

I hope to see a new chapter soon.
Review By [Meldarion] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Dave
Review:
I have really enjoyed this story and have re-read it twice.
I truly hope that you will be able to update and I hope that you have not left this fanfic to die.
dave
Review By [Dave] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Traveler
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So it begins, the last chapter's title. I hope its a foretelling of updates to follow. With the newest title of Halo due out next month lets celebrate with more of this wonderfull story. PLEASE update.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Mechconstrictor
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I have to say that this is a really great story. Is there any chance of you finishing it?
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Katricia
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Evil 3-year cliffhanger. Everything was just starting to come to a head!

I love the thing with the Jolly Roger flags. The mental picture was hilarious.

I feel horrible for Cordelia and Harmony. Particularly Cordelia - at least Harmony died relatively quickly.

I do hope you continue this. Despite a somewhat shaky beginning, in the more recent chapters this fic seemed as if it was finally starting to come into its own. The only thing about this fic that I didn't love was your portrayal of Buffy. Sure, she could be a bit annoying at times during the series, but I think you're being a bit harsh on her.

Overall, I think this story deserves a resounding 9/10. I've loved it so far.
Review By [Katricia] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Wolflady
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I really hope you continue this...
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So it begins" from gaulty
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wants to read more...
Review By [gaulty] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So it begins" from stargatefan
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I liked most of the story. You had some really good ideas in this fic. I did not enjoy Cordelia's treatment at all. The more I read the in this fic the more I got outraged they didn't dust Angel even after he got his soul back. Buffy really was fucked up badly. Perhaps you should not list it as a Faith/Xander fic since there really wasn't any of that in there. I enjoyed it a lot.
Review By [stargatefan] • Date [22 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from Bethanymom
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Though I am a little late in reading your story I wanted to let you know what a fabulous story it is. Though I am not well versed in Halo you have done a wonderful job in your descriptions, and weaving the plot and details in to the storyline so that I don't feel lost in the story.

If the muses so inspire I would be delighted to read more about these fascinating characters!!
Review By [Bethanymom] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So it begins" from rath
Review:
cool sroty :) saw that its a really old one but hopeflly some day you will pick it up again :)
Review By [rath] • Date [1 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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