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Review of chapter "'I need that in Captain Dummy talk, Kaylee'" from Marcel
Review:
Great start so far. The Firefly voices are perfect :) Can't wait to see Illyria's entrance in the plot.
Comments from author:
Thank you kindly.
I guess I've watched the DVD's often enough for those voices to take up residence in my brain....
Review By [Marcel] • Date [9 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'I need that in Captain Dummy talk, Kaylee'" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Neat! River in your story is so cool!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
She's River, she's ALWAYS cool!
^_^
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [9 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'I need that in Captain Dummy talk, Kaylee'" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
You're doing a really good job with writing the characters and the scenes. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you.
It's a bit out of my comfort zone, with no Buffy characters at all, but so far so good.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [8 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from Satori
Review:
WTF is archer talking about? This fic >>>> Return to Normal

Keep on goin'
Comments from author:
---This fic >>>> Return to Normal---

Thanks, I kind of think so too (and I tried really, really hard to like RtN, and couldn't do it).
On the other hand, if we're talking word count, then that other guy wins hands down....

The writing software in my head has been crashed for a month or two now, but I'm trying to get things working again.
More on this story will happen.
...Eventually.
Review By [Satori] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from thepaperblade
Review:
The characters in your story really ring true. And... wow. Just wow.
Comments from author:
^_^!
That battle scene sounded really good coming through your home theatre system speakers, didn't it?
Review By [thepaperblade] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from Archer
Review:
This is one of the best pieces of fanfic I have read since Return To Normal by jakl. Please continue.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I've got too many stories going right now, so some of them are being neglected at the moment, but I'll come back to this in a week or two. Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [Archer] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
Great Story.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [13 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from firefly
Review:
This was wonderful! You really have these characters' voices down. I can't wait to see what comes next!
Review By [firefly] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from Runewolf
Review:
I loved the first chapter. I hadn't checked the cross-over until the end, so checking that did puzzle me, as I have to admit skimming the introduction. Wonderfully written.

River was right on, as was Mal and the general Firefly-ness of it.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What a great first chapter, and you are justly proud of your fluency in "Firefly-speak". The characters are definitely themselves, as I would imagine and want them to be following the events in the movie, and the River-Jayne dynamic (his grudging acceptance at times, and her gleeful tormenting, including the inevitable snowball fight at the end of the battle) is first-rate. Plus, you really seem to have gotten into Mal's thought processes and personality in a very interesting and entertaining way.

I can't wait to read more of this.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from Mackon
Review:
This looks interesting.

Well written hope to see more.

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Mackon] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
Brilliant scenery description, characterisations and fighting sequences, but what, no heroine having their life made worse than it is already?

How can this be?

Where is Kayley's hideous background story? (teasing)

Looking forward to see who the Whedonverse characters you are going to cross will turn out to be.
Comments from author:
--Where is Kayley's hideous background story? (teasing)--

Pbbbbbbbbbbbtttttttttt!!!
::Thumbs in ears and fingers wiggling at you::

^_^

Kaylee (not 'Kayley', btw, nyah again!) is currently in her bunk with the ridiculously handsome doctor, and is much too busy to bemoan her horrible childhood just now.
Maybe later.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from SailAweigh
Review:
Great start! Can't wait to find out if the almost-Reavers are something we'll end up recognizing. Or not. ::shrug:: I'm curious to see how you're going to introduce Illyria as I think this chapter was just fine without her. Your story, though, and since I did enjoy this chapter, I'm sure I'll enjoy the next.
Review By [SailAweigh] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from Bobboky
Review:
i am excited to see Fred introduced... nice work on this chapter
Comments from author:
Fred?
Really?
Where?

Glad you liked it, of course, but... Fred?
::Scratches head and scans the field of bloody snow and broken bodies::
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'Big Damn Heroes'" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
Review:
*pokepokepoke* Where's Illyria?
Comments from author:
Next chapter.
I, um, went sort of overboard with the action sequence. Blew my whole budget for this chapter on extras costuming and fake snow.
My accountant is PISSED!
^_^
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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