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Gotham Slayer

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Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from mousemt
Review:
happy, happy, happy I love when good stories are updated. This story's just been fun, realistic characters and gradual, but continual, plot development. You've even been adding to it frequently. Woohoo!
Review By [mousemt] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from Waverly
Review:
this is great! please update again soon!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from grd
Review:
Nice staging. I thought for a moment that a robbery was going to happen at the restaurant. Really wondering what Bats/Bruce is making of Buffy's activities.
Comments from author:
It almost did, I wrote something going down at the restaurant and then decided it was too early in the story for either Bruce or Buffy to see the other do something truly hero-y without giving up their secret identities. I've got plans for Buffy (insert evil cackle here) ;-)
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from VillageOrchid
Review:
That was cool, followed by nice. But um... did they ever make that telephone call to the police?
Comments from author:
They made the call, it's only mentioned in passing though. You have to assume it was as short and to the point as they could make it because they were freezing their little California behinds off ;-)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from Silence
Review:
Wow, I am totally digging this story. Finding a Batman fic that can hold my interest is a hard thing to do, but you've snared me from the start. Great job! I can't wait to see what's next.
Review By [Silence] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from KnightOwl
Review:
It was just getting good between Buffy and Bruce, too bad you ended it there. I can't wait to see what happens.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Wow you are doing a fantastic job in capturing Bruce Wayne personality, especially the hints of his real self showing through.

Good work.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from Ailisande
Review:
I'm really enjoying your story. It's flowing a lot more truthfully than some of the others where it's all-of-a-sudden, Buffy's Batman's new sidekick! The fact that you're easing Buffy and Dawn, and without the omg!angst of their possible relationship, into normal life and reasoning Buffy into actions. She wants to fight the good fight, so she's helping the people in her day job; the city has lots of cameras and police versus SunnyD, so she wears a mask. And I love the little "you can take the girl out of California, but not the California out of the girl" in having them make the bad decision to walk home. It humanizes them a little bit and is a reminder that they haven't just omgfit into Gotham.

Can't wait for your next chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it :)
Review By [Ailisande] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from DeepRed
Review:
:) Your hair was down at the restaurant...awkward. Like how Buffy's starting to develop her cool again and has her slayer sense up and running. Stalker indeed, poor Batman but I suppose he's been called worse. Oh like Buffy wallet friendly mask.:)
Review By [DeepRed] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wow, Fancy!" from war
Review:
Buffy better watch out Bruce never could let a mystery go without looking into it.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gainful Employment" from temperancenewt
Review:
ok i started reading this fic with the teek i bet this isn't going to work thought. as i got further down the page and read more chapters i can't deny what a wonderful writer you are and that i am totally hooked.

can't wait to read what's going to happen.
Review By [temperancenewt] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gainful Employment" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting story so far, please add more to this soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gainful Employment" from DeepRed
Review:
Great chapter! Valentino smooth :) I love how in character everyone is, especially Buffy. I have to wonder what Batman thought of Buffy saying she wasn't rescued especially if he talked to Gordon and heard what she had to say about the guys in the alley. Anyways, keep up the greatness and happy writing!
Review By [DeepRed] • Date [31 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gainful Employment" from Coralskipper
Review:
As a fan of the comics, I can't tell you what a Bruce move that is asking out someone who has perked Batman's interests. The next chapter won't come soon enough.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad it's ringing true :)
Review By [Coralskipper] • Date [31 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gainful Employment" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Good chapter, I look forward to the next
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [31 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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