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Review of chapter "Meet the Staff – part 1" from CrystalBlaze
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These pretentious snobs need to end up in SO much pain.

Then again, I'm the kind that loved the empty-headed "Street news" jerk go up to Spider Jerusalem and get his face rearranged for interrupting the man with a demand for how it feels to be badgered by "A real reporter"...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet the Staff – part 1" from Carojen
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Since you replaced the real life-character with a made-up one, it would be a good idea to post a short description in the beginning, just to introduce the character. Something like: "Rudolf Grayson, famous for his tv program Cooking with the Devil, turned to the camera."

Also, I'm not sure that Rudolf is a good name this close to christmas; I keep expecting people to notice a talking reindeer. :/
Review By [Carojen] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet the Staff – part 1" from stonewar
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oh awesome. I just got into Kitchen Nightmares so this is pertinent to my interests. You are a little inconsistent with the replacement name you are using. Ramsey is still in a couple places. But if People can write about Wrestlers I don't see why you can't write about reality tv stars.
Comments from author:
Oops! Will fix that.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teaser - Introduction" from Cutiepie
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Oooh, I am really looking forward to this one. I love "Nights" and love well-written Xander. This looks like it may just have all that and a punk-slamming too. What's not to enjoy? =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Teaser - Introduction" from ReflectionsOfReality
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Nice fix, I hope that we can see more of this story very soon.
~Reflections
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teaser - Introduction" from Mcspender
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I really really wanna see the inevitable cook duel: Gordon vs Casey.
Who's the biggest buttkicker in the kitchen: the rude brit or the SEAL vet??.
Placeee yer bets people!!.
Cool chapter, gonna track it!!.
Aand Merry Christmas!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teaser - Introduction" from SamDragon
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Oh boy,the ways this could be bad for them. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teaser - Introduction" from eriktheviking
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A well written and fun idea.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Teaser - Introduction" from Carojen
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Teasers aren't nice... This looks like it might be really funny!
Review By [Carojen] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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