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Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (Vers. 1.1, 30.10.2011)" from ReflectionsOfReality
Review:
I love this story so far and really can't wait to see what sort of costume you end up choosing. I had a scarily brilliant idea for a costume that I have not seen before, Rafiki from the Lion King, his level of spiritualism and mysticism is a step beyond even most Shamans but even better he is all about natural order and the balance that is the circle of life. Now take Rafiki's belief system as a base to use to build on with the dozens of types of human magics available and you can end up with quite a scary shamanistic mage.

The costume idea would work wonderfully in this story but as well as on its own.

What do you think?
~Reflections
Comments from author:
Sadly I had to look that up on wikipedia to even understand something about Rafiki. Out of all stories i have seen i have managed to miss the Lion king.

I know i am ashamed. I will amidiatly punish myself by having a cup of tea. :D Hmmm tea.

That is a good idea, but the story is an old one and mostly done already and you will see what he will dress up as.
Thanks for you comment John Hatten Carlsson.
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (Vers. 1.1, 30.10.2011)" from lillyb
Review:
I love it, great start, very good work. I only saw a few small grammar errors. All and all well done.
Comments from author:
thank you and about the grammar thing, I do my best and word isn't to helpful in that regard also :)
Review By [lillyb] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (Vers. 1.1, 30.10.2011)" from HolyKnight
Review:
Hmm.....It would be interesting if he were to get a clothing that belonged to a Gold Digger's Werecheetah character.......just to watch the fun.....
Comments from author:
thank you for the review, but I think that won't happen :) If you want a Gold Digger Xover read my story Fury Moon I started to post here also :)
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One (Vers. 1.1, 30.10.2011)" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
A Very Good Begining. Hopefully new costumes will be chosen.

Some that have not be done before. B'wana Beast or Beau Geste would be in keeping with Uraki African hertage, Xander might choose them to honor his mentor Uraki.

Another possiblity if he wanted to both annoy Angel and intrigue Buffy, is Batman (Not the one everyone knows, But Superfriends comic character. Batman could turn ito a bat, he was hero on another Earthlike World his wife was Batwoman. They looked like Bela Lugosi's Dracula and Vampira.) Andrew Bennett the hero of 'I..Vampire' series. Willow could go as Deborah Dancer his vampire love. Both Bennett and Dancer were not hurt by the sun. (He regenerated after each exposure and the did not hurt her at all.) Iron Munro - Arn Munro is the non-canonical son of Hugo Danner the title character from Philip Wylie's 1930 novel Gladiator.

If Xander wanted to honor Giles. Alan Quartermain, Danger Dick, or Hercules (The Steve Reeves Version)

If Willow picks his costume. Harry Potter to her Susan Bones or James Potter to her Lili Evans, King Belgarion to her Queen C'Nedra. Some have been done but could be done again.

If Dawn uses her puppy eyes of doom upon him, then King Aragorn of Gondor will be reunited with his Queen Arwen.

One of the Elsewords, What If, or Amalgam comic characters would also be nice.

Peace
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (Vers. 1.1, 30.10.2011)" from nightowl
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Sweet. I love this. It looks like someone is taking xander in hand but will he ever find out that he is an avatar? Will he convert or just groan that it figures. I want to see which way this goes. please write more.
Review By [nightowl] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (Vers. 1.1, 30.10.2011)" from kyzhart
Review:
Oh more PLEASE. Love the Witchdoctor!
Comments from author:
yep, he is a interesting guy :)
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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