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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Reunited" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* Hyper willow. *snicker* Now that's just .... Poor Speed. Did you have to inflict Hyper Willow on him? At least it wasn't Darth Willow. Or worse yet Darth Hyper Willow!

More please!
Comments from author:
This is only babbly Willow; she didn't actually have any caffeine this time. Maybe next time Speed can see how it affects her.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Reunited" from AllenPitt
Review:
huh. ok, so he goes to Florida with big brother then maybe 1 year+ later, starts getting weird emails from Willow about this new friend she's made called "Buffy"...? Eventually gets concerned and shows up for a visit? For the different scooby gang I'm voting: Willow (of course) and maybe Jonathan or Amy.
Comments from author:
Definite possibilities there.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from twlight
Review:
I love this story so far and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's certainly different for me to try a Xander-centered fic.
Review By [twlight] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Aw! Speed's so happy to find Xander. How cute! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
It's like trying to write an emotional Oz. Some people you just have to say it's OOC and deal with it.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What a good big brother!
Comments from author:
Would have been nice for Xander to have him growing up, but then again, he wouldn't be Xander anymore, would he?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from AXanFan
Review:
I have only watched a few episodes of CSI: Miami, but it seems to be a more and more popular x-over in Fic so I have become acquainted with the characters, at least how they tend to be portrayed in Fanfiction.

I have always liked the idea of Xander having a different family and I think it could be really interesting to have him related to Speed. I look forward to how he will be accepted into the Miami dynamic, but I hate to see him lose touch with the Sunnydale crew -- their interaction is what makes Xander who he is at his core.

I like that Xander is still so young -- he has a chance to salvage some of his childhood. Please write more soon
Comments from author:
I just got the first 8 seasons on DVD (early Christmas prezzie to myself) and am into season 3 of watching them all. Since Speed was only really in the first two, I just have to decide where to put Xander into that timeline.

Don't worry, he'll stay in touch with his buds. I picked this age because it was pre-series for BtVS, but Xander was old enough that he was the Xander Buffy *would* have met, just a year younger.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from LNR
Review:
Wasn't this already posted? I have hoping for another chapter.
Comments from author:
That's why it says re-post in the summary. When the beta(s) get the next chapter back to me, I can start to think about chapter 4.
Review By [LNR] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from Genuka
Review:
Truly evil. MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
So you like evil? Is that what you're trying to tell me?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from AllenPitt
Review:
It'd be weird if Xander departs for Miami & the scooby gang ends up being Buffy, Willow and Jesse instead...
Comments from author:
I'm not sure who the Scooby gang is going to be - aside from Willow, that is.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Learning a Secret" from Harry
Review:
It sounds like Horation Caine is going to be coming in for a visit to get some answers! And I feel sorry for the Harris family when he gets done with them. Horation has a tendency to be able to get answers out of most people. I wonder if he and Nick Fury might be distant relatives, considering their abilities to get answers out of people.
Comments from author:
I know *I* wouldn't want to commit a crime when H is nearby. Not unless I had a d**n good reason for it.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Learning a Secret" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very AU for the Buffyverse, but I like it.
Comments from author:
It's a new idea for me, too. Hopefully I can write a Xander-centered fic.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Learning a Secret" from AllenPitt
Review:
How indeed. Looks like the Harris' will be spending extra time in the penal institution. Which oddly enough is safer than living in Sunnydale, probably.
Comments from author:
Yeah, if only they knew they could save the State some money by just leaving the couple in a Sunnydale graveyard at night.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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