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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Difdi
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> “Harmony Kendal, licensed to be a slut!”

More like 0069, License to Thrill.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Knightmare
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Please for the love of God update! Are you punishing us? :(
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BarbarossaRotbart
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Minor nitpick: The name of Diana's lover was Steve Trevor. Diana Prince was the name she used to be close to him.
But it seems that you use the post Crisis and pre New 52 reality. Then Steve was never her lover and she did not arrive in Man's World sixty years ago but only ten years ago. In that reality her (time travelling) mother had been the Wonder Woman of the Golden Age and Wildcat had been her lover.
EDIT: The name of Diana's (twin) sister is Donna not Dana. And she was not the last new Amazon. Cassie Sandsmark (Wonder Girl II) is the last known new Amazon (and a demi-goddess because Zeus is her father).
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Ah there is a sequel, wonderful!

I like what you've done with the story, it is interesting to see a different perspective on the normal Halloween stories and adding an Amazon to the mix is great!

Thanks for a great story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Knightmare
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Great chapter! You are on a roll here! I just wish you would update faster! (lol) I really like this story! :)
Jenny aquitted herself well on her first try. Granted she made a mistake or two but the important thing is she came out on top. I think it is great that Diana taught her how to fight in one night. She will be a even more powerful force for good.
I did have a question though. Does she have all of Wonder Woman's powers or just a faction of it? Jenny mentioned she was nearly as strong as a slayer. In my opinion Diana is far stronger then Buffy therefore Jenny should be to. Can she fly also? I do hope this is a power she will discover later on. I do want to see her fly very much! Please consider it if you can. I look forward to your response on this if able. Thanks and update soon. :D
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review I really appreciate it. To answer your question Jenny does not have the powers of Wonder Woman, she cant fly, at least not yet, but who knows what Artemis and perhaps Athena may give her as time goes by.
I don't know when the next chapter will be up since I'm in the process of laying it out and work is definitely going to interfere for a while. Fingers crossed for another update before the end of the month.
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Genuka
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Evil evil evil author. I like how you decided to train her. It was quite ingenious. I was never quite convinced that Angel's soul was all that pure.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Knightmare
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Great and compelling chapter! Jenny should keep quiet about what she is now from the rest of the Scoobies especially Buffy. She would most likely overreact anyway. Besides this has nothing to do with Buffy therefore it should be kept private like a secret identity. Giles knowing is enough.
Boy Spike sure is stupid! If and when Jenny gets a hold of him, Spike will wish he left town when he had the chance! I hope Jenny makes him suffer! I always hated that prick and wanker on the show. Update soon! XD
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
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I like how Dru's vision gives them the chance to make a choice to leave Sunnydale, even if they don't take that choice - the choice was given.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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I like that you took care to show that Artemis doesn't need all of her followers to be virgins, and give permission/blessing to Janna for her choice.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
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A lovely beginning.

Of course, Enyos is probably already on his way to yell at Janta as the Kalderash seers likely told him she's not their Jana anymore, and I doubt he stayed to listen to the details..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
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Go Amazon nation.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Knightmare
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This is a great opening start! Jenny with the power of Wonder Woman is going to turn the Hellmouth upside down! Oh the possibilities! I am positive Giles will be understanding of Jenny's past and secrets considering his own shady history once she has explained everything. They are truly soul mates. ( I actually cried when she died on the show, damn writers.) Giles and Jenny need to boot Angel out of Sunnydale post haste no matter how much Buffy will bitch about it. The sooner he leaves town the better! Angel has his own destiny in LA working for the Powers and saving lost souls and earning his redemption. Please make this wonderful story into a long one. I will be with you every step of the way ready to offer insights and suggestions when needed or asked. You have at least one dedicated reader who will look forward to what you write and will as long you continue to do so. Keep up the excellent work and take care. :D
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
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I'm hoping that one of the first things AFTER she tells Ripper about her becoming an Amazon is her role there in Sunnydale... And that Giles keeps his head out of his ass long enough to /think/ about why she had to do it.

There's a number of fics that have Giles resenting her heritage due to some event in his teens souring him on all Romany people, despite it being only one or two that hurt him, so maybe he can keep from becoming brain dead here?

If not, I heartily recommend Xander stepping up to protect another of His Girls - even from both the necrophiliac Slayer and the bigot ted Watcher... And even the at times hypocritical Witch.... And if you can get rid of Oz, I'd appreciate it. He's always 'The Cool, Laid Back Musician Slash Werewolf' but he never really /does/ anything until pushed into it...

So update soon so's I can gets my reading fix!!!!!
Comments from author:
While I do like those stories that have Xander and Jenny start a relationship after Giles abandons her for whatever reason this wont be one of them. I'd like to be able to tell you that the next chapter will arrive soon but my Muse isn't co-operating at the moment. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Review By [trongod] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Tempi
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An interesting story idea to begin with. I'm pleased you decided to continue it. So does Jenny have the standard Amazon package of greater strength and endurance or does she qualify for the whole "Wonder-Woman-blessed-by-the-gods" package?
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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