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Mommy Aoife

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Review of chapter "Mommies" from Dragonelf
Review:
This story looks interesting so far and I am looking forward to see what you will be inspired to add to it.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Carrot Cheese Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Comments from author:
Interesting comment. Thanks for it, then! :)
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Demonspawn
Review:
VERY interesting start. Will definitely keep reading. Just one tip:a millenium is singular, millenia is plural. Keep writing.
Comments from author:
Okay, thanks for the tip! :)
Review By [Demonspawn] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
Nice start.Has to be better then the Dursleys.
Comments from author:
You have to be Dumbledore to believe otherwise. (Or to be a DE, though the Malfoys wouldn't necessarily be that bad.)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Daeth
Review:
Lots of potential here. The idea of Bo and Harry being siblings, and other things from the show.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad that you like it.
Review By [Daeth] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Still too early to say how things are going to be, but assuming you haven't made any significant changes to the timing, the possibilities of Bo and Harry being siblings are VERY interesting...
Comments from author:
It's the timing that concerns me too: I'm reasonably sure that Aoife had Bo born and foistered off to her step-parents already at this time. But I'll think about Bo and Harry being siblings too.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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