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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Scoobies invade Cheyenne Mountain. Can't wait until they find out what the Deep Space Radar Telemetry really is.
Comments from author:
I'll try not to disappoint. As for finding out, who says they'll find out? The plan is to cause mayhem, rescue Andrew and steal a lightsaber; who said anything about weird rings?
Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mountainelements
Review:
Love how Buffy keeps referring to them as the tv repair guys! I'm going to have to view this story as crack though because I can't believe that the Council would actually deal with the military in any form like that. It's really funny though.
Comments from author:
I don't mind if you view the story as crack. Frankly, the situation is a bit ridiculous, and likely to get even sillier. The trick will be keeping everyone in character throughout the insanity to come.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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I laughed a lot during both stories. That's a good thing. I look forward to seeing what happens next. ~snickers~ Big bad tv repair guys!

CT.
Comments from author:
Don't mess with the tv repair guys. I'm glad that you liked the chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ianquest
Review:
Hilarious! I laughed until I choked when Dawn's Monty Python references segued into the Lost Girl Scout Troop plan. If I die laughing, I'm so haunting you...

Can we expect to see Xander engaging the perimeter security guards in discussions of the migratory habits of laden vs unladen swallows? :)
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you liked the chapter, and don't worry if you want to haunt me; I won't mind. As for Xander, the next chapter's a Stargate chapter, so you may have to wait just a little bit to see how Buffy's plan goes.
Review By [ianquest] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tomfo
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As bad as Buffy's plan sounds I'm not really surprised no one else has anything better, these ARE the people that thought they could get useful intel from a Bringer.
EDIT: It's more than likely they will but they need to start working together like they used to, season7 sucked cos they all expected Buffy to lead instead of how they used to bounce ideas around till they came up with a workable plan.
Comments from author:
Well, maybe they'll surprise you yet. After all, the Scoobies can't have just been lucky all these years.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Batamut
Review:
:P
*sings* Brave Sir Xander ran away :D
Poor poor scoobes myahahahahaha
Comments from author:
After the first story, I was simply inundated with people wanting to know how Xander managed to keep out of prison, so I felt the people had a right to know, and nothing explains this sort of thing better than Monty Python references.
Review By [Batamut] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Geyer
Review:
Excellent beginning! The lost Girl Scout troop is a wonderful plan, at least from the reader's point of view, because it will probably go about as well as Xander expects it to, i.e. not at all. Now that Monty Python quotes are being thrown about, I picture Buffy or Xander trying to explain how they got lost to Jack or some other supposed TV repair guy, who would respond: "Are you telling me Girl Scout troops migrate?"

Silly and fun. I'm glad you decided to continue, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Expect the silliness and funniness to continue. As for Monty Python, quotes, Dawn's not around anymore, but I guess Xander or Willow might still be up to deploying them.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xovervore
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Loving it! The scoobies won't have to worry about the government because those guys will be too embarrassed when Buffy's plan works. Military bases (in TV land, and often in real life also) have pitiful security and SGC is no exception - sure it can be difficult once you're inside but getting inside is fairly easy. The worst that can happen is that they'll be captured, and that's what they want - it is an old technique that works to infiltrate a place by letting oneself get captured.
Anyway I'm sure that they'll reach some sort of deal between SGC and the WC that will leave everyone happy. And is Buffy's true interest in the lightsaber or its wielder, hmmm?
And people don't get too wrapped up in technicalities - this is a humour story; not a vision of the canonverse future post-Chosen.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. You're quite right, as well. In BTVS, the military and police make are so laughable that one wonders why the government even keeps them around. The SGC is much better, but still manages to get infiltrated at least four or five times a season. As for Buffy's interests, she's a big girl; she can multitask.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediLaSombra
Review:
Looking forward to seeing Buffy get zatted repeatedly.
Comments from author:
Oh, that's a terrible thing to say, even if she is asking for it. I hope that I do not disappoint.
Review By [JediLaSombra] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nicjphill
Review:
LOL! Loved it and looking forward to the conclusion of the girl scout plan and seeing Buffy with a lightsaber!
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so far. As for the conclusion, we're still a few chapters off from there.
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Okay, first off, thanks for writing this sequel!!! ;-)

Second off, after reading that Dawn watched Monty Python, I was waiting for her to say to Buffy, "Aren't you going to tell us that you have a cunning plan?", then wait for Giles to mutter, "Oh, dear lord, what did I do to deserve *this*?"

Third off, I fully expect to see Dawn ultimately rescuing the entire group after they get captured. ;-)

Fourth off (if there is such a thing), I would have preferred to see some of the older Scoobies and/or Slayers (Buffy, Faith, Willow, Vi, Rona, and maybe even Kennedy) drafted for Faith's stripper plan. ;-)

I'm not talking this one too seriously, since it is a crack!fic, 'cause otherwise I'd be screaming about Giles' complete shirking of his moral and ethical responsibilities by ceding command of anything other than a group of five-year-olds for a combat mission to Buffy.

More soon, please. ;-)
Comments from author:
I didn't even think of that line for Dawn, but it would be quite funny. As for as Dawn coming to the rescue, she's at school, isn't she? I mean, Dawn would never sneak out of school, right? As for the stripper plan, it would have been funny, but I think that this has even more potential in some respects. You're also right that I'm taking a few liberties on account of this being a fairly mild crack fic. Of course, considering that Buffy was left in charge of an army of potentials all through Season Seven, I'm not sure that leaving Buffy in charge would be out of character for Giles anyway. I'm not saying that it would be a good idea, but he might do it anyway.

Hopefully, the next installment will be up in a few days, as it's already partly written.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from euceri
Review:
just waiting for the fireworks. this is gonna be good.thanks for the sequel.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.
Review By [euceri] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calliopesol
Review:
I'm glad that Buffy's got her priorities straight. *grin*

And I'm double-glad you decided to write this sequel.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I suppose all I can say is that I'm glad that you're glad.
Review By [calliopesol] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Never, ever, ever, ever let known weapon-nutjob Buffy plan something, specially a raid against an special forces unit used to fight against stronger than human enemies.
It's not worthy xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked the chapter. As for Buffy, yes, her plan is not so great, but you have to admit that she's a champion when it comes to improvising, so she may yet make it out of this one.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
*Incapacitated with Laughter* (Note: this review is for this one and the previous fic) ... Oh, this is going to be good ... *Incapacitated with more Laughter* ... anyway in thanks something hilarious for something hilarious (that I found on youtube) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tJSQFzw1pEE
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad that you liked the story.
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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