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Review of chapter "Eighth Of November" from Raider
Review:
well done. very well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Thank you.
Review By [Raider] • Date [20 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eighth Of November" from deathgeonous
Review:
First off, as to your computer problems, that sucks. I myself have been having tons of computer problems latly, so much so in fact that HP is just replacing my computer, but even then, I managed to keep all my files, so.... yeah, that suck. Second off, this is a great new fic and I'm loving it. Third off, a cliffhanger in only the second chapter? That might be a bad sign. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
1) Yeah, I know my computer problems sucked but I felt like I should have explained why I haven't been posting anything.

2) I'm glad you're enjoying it.

3) The cliffhanger was meant as more of an attention grabber but it'll make more sense when the third chapter is posted.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [20 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eighth Of November" from Cmiller
Review:
More... please.

Also I don't know if you got it but I suggested Faith as Kaidan's reincarnate which would be kinda entertaining. Just fyi.
Comments from author:
I did get your message and I'm working on Chapter 3: Aftermath. I find it would be an interesting choice as well.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [20 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from SilverWave
Review:
Interesting story.

Cheers :-)

I was debating if I should post a review as I wouldn't want to have any of your terrible bad luck with computers to somehow rub off on me ;-)

But it was a good story and you do deserve the review :-)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you found it interesting and that you decided to try your luck on giving me a review. I really like getting reviews.

Thank you for reviewing the chapter. I hope to have more available soon.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from AndreaMaine
Review:
I would like to read this story's next installment. This one was enjoyable to read and I like stories with a Strong Willow that doesn't go Darth Willow.
Comments from author:
I am writing the next installment right now and I am rather happy that you found in enjoyable. I find it to be too much of a cliche that has any Strong Willow become a Darth Willow which is part of the reason why I had Commander Willow Shepard be a regular soldier and not a form of biotic. That removes the temptation from me to have Willow create a biotic field inside someone's brain and expand it until that person's head explodes.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from deamon
Review:
know what would be kinda cool. save kendras life and make faith into jack. The only reason i didnt like jack as a pairing was cuz i dont find bald females attractive. but faith and jack as one person might be interesting
Comments from author:
I already plan on having Jack in the story so that idea is out.
Review By [deamon] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from deamon
Review:
i tried the renagade shepard once and didnt like it cuz i felt like such an ass lol. you could always do xander/aria lol. but other then xander/tali i also liked xander/miranda (or not for this story but in general i want to see a xander/femshepard cuz i have never seen one.)
Comments from author:
I don't mind some of the renegade interrupts in ME2 and ME3 because they were more action hero than asshole.

Xander and Aria, now that would be a pairing from hell but in a good way I suppose. Though it could be more of Xander trying to run from Aria.

I could see Xander and Miranda though. Probably would be a lot like Xander and Cordelia in the relationship department.
Review By [deamon] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
a shame about your hardware and your lost data...but to be frank....thats what backups are for :)

nice start to a Mass Effect cross and I can't wait to see more. Seeing Willow as Shepard is at least to me new :)
Comments from author:
True but I wasn't thinking obviously.

The reason I chose Willow instead of say Xander or Buffy is because you would expect them to be the first people you would have be Shepard.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from deamon
Review:
I'venever actually romaced liara. in ME1 it was ashley and in ME2 and 3 it was usually tali. I just love her accent and how she gets embarrassed and plus she has a hot body lol. So is your shepard paragon?
Comments from author:
For both my male and female Shepards in ME1, it was Liara. For me, it was her softness that drew me in plus the hot body. ME2, I didn't have my female Shepard romance anyone because when I tried it seemed like to me that she was coming on a little too strong. For male Shepard, I've only completed the Miranda romance though on my other saves it seems like he was more supportive and comforting.

Anyway, yes my Shepard is a paragon though there may have been a few renegade interrupts done a time or two but nothing major.
Review By [deamon] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from deamon
Review:
ok this is pretty unique story. I really like it. So if its willow/liara then what bout xander (my fav char lol.) I vote for a xander/tali if you havent hooked her up with garrus like in ME3.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I'm basing Shepard on how I normally play the game so yes, Willow/Liara. Xander/Tali is a good idea and one I've already been considering.
Review By [deamon] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from Panaka
Review:
The cosmology of this one hurts my head just thinking about it. Full universal reset, but everything still evolves susch that there is a Earth and Shepard gets born. Meanwhile you're dropping the main ME races in.
Did the main colony worlds also come back? Any System Alliance worlds betwee them? What about infrastructure like eezo and mineral mines? What about systems that in SG belong to Goa'uld and in ME to a major race? If it's just the main planets, what is the Normandy doing there? What about the mass relays?
The whole way you managed to smash everything together makes very little sense.
Review By [Panaka] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from CastorandPollux
Review:
excellent ....... please continue.
Comments from author:
I'm working on it.
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from Cmiller
Review:
Well then glad I'm not the only one that prefers Ash to Kaidan. So if you have Cordy as a person on Akuze with Shep, with Buff and Xand as Mindor losses. Where would you have Faith, Oz, and Tara? Because I think Faith would be interesting as a possible loss from the Suicide mission if not Ash.

hehe that would be awesome to see.

Yep, totally agree.
Comments from author:
I mainly have based Willow Shepard on how I ended up playing the Mass Effect trilogy. I'm not exactly sure where I might have Faith been. Oz as well because I don't want to try to pull him as Joker because I'm going to have Joker alive and well.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from Cmiller
Review:
Oh... just one question, Virmire Survivor: Ash or Kaidan? If Kaidan can Faith be Ash's reincarnate please... maybe have this be a Second chance for Shepard to save Ash in the form of Willow keeping Faith a float(personally loved the bromance between the VS!Ash and Shep).

Ps love the Liara/Shep combo like always.
Comments from author:
Ashley is the one who survived Virmire. Personally, she's my preferred survivor as opposed to Kaidan. I liked her warrior poet versus Kaidan who seemed to me like he griped about everything.

About Faith, can you picture her and Buffy with omniblades versus vampires?

I also love the Liara/Shepard pairing. With Shepard being the ultimate warrior, Liara helps to balance that with a softer side I think she brings out in everyone's favorite N7 human spectre.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Than A Memory" from rexcalon
Review:
Great story i love where it's headed.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [rexcalon] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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