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Code Ragnarok: Stand and Be Counted

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Review of chapter "Slayer, Mages and Demons, Oh, my...!, Part II" from Rich
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Not bad at all, the second chapter makes the first a lot clearer - I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that "metal giants of the rising sun" is a reference to Robotech.

Added by Rich: That's not a coincidence. Several of the mechs in the earliest versions of Battletech were based on Japanese Mecha. The story on Battletechwiki is that the company purchased the artwork from someone who didn't have the legal rights to it, which led to some legal disputes, which led to depictions of those mechs being banned - which led to their being called "the Unseen". Evidently the dispute had since been settled, so they're now "Reseen"..
Comments from author:
Actually, no. But you are close, it's mecha anime. Specifically, a early 2000s sequel/remake of one of the first mecha anime.

Although Robotech would be a great addition to this, if only to see the reaction of teh Redrock Rangers to teh Valkyries (there is a Battletech mech which is nearly identical).

Added by author: lats news that I had, was that they were still unseen, but it has been a few years since I kept track of Battletech
Review By [Rich] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer, Mages and Demons, Oh, my...!, Part II" from DarthTenebrus
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Or the Redrock Rangers...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer, Mages and Demons, Oh, my...!, Part II" from Harry
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As I said in Eliminator "A call is sent through Time and Space for one and all to hear." Well, this time it not only went through time and Space but Dimensions as well. Welcome to Ragnarok. Suit up, Armor up, and lets get down to business. Its do or die time, no in between. We fail, ALL dimensions will fall! This cannot be allowed to happen!
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer, Mages and Demons, Oh, my...!, Part II" from djhardim
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This may be a dumb question, but why does Samantha Finn outrank her husband?

Thanks
Comments from author:
It's mostly fanon, but Riley going AWOL during season 4 left a black mark in his file, which has delayed his promotions.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayers, Mages and Demons. Oh, my...!, part I" from HMaxMarius
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Very nice. While I'm not familiar with the cross, I do like the look into how the Code Ragnarok is impacting Scoobies in a parallel dimension. I'm looking forward to the next installment and will be adding your name to the 'Battlefront' list.

One thing I will point out. There are a fair number of grammatical errors due to improper tenses on some of the words 'felt' when you meant 'feel' and the like. The words are spelled correctly, so a spell checker won't catch them. You may want to make a proofreading pass through the story or acquire a beta reader to catch those things for you.

Anywho, keep up the great work on the story!
Comments from author:
Thank you, and sorry for the errors. I realize that I wrote it too quickly, as I'm usually quite a bit more thorough in proofreading. And as I noted to Harry below, the franchise tvtropes page is a good place to start (if I had more time I would add one of Code Ragnarok to that site)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayers, Mages and Demons. Oh, my...!, part I" from Rich
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Welcome Aboard !
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Thanks!
Review By [Rich] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayers, Mages and Demons. Oh, my...!, part I" from Harry
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We can use all the Mystical as well as non Mystical help we can get! But I want to know more about these people before they get the green light to engage in Ragnarok!
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Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from Angelchan
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Good chapter...
Review By [Angelchan] • Date [16 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stand and Be Counted" from ChaosLady
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I haven't read all the chapters yet, but not being familiar with all the worlds shown I was looking for something I knew well. I saw the universe that has Harry Potter as a military leader in the Star Wars universe, but is there a chapter that crosses over directly with the Harry Potter universe? If so, which one is it?
Comments from author:
Lead Author Comment: At this point there is not a specific Harry Potter sole-cross story. However, if you are interested in writing one, you would be very welcome to join the fray.

I toyed with the idea of doing one myself but my muse didn't have enough motivation to do it justice. I would have done it using the canon book timeline with year one being 1991 and year seven being 1998 based on the year two celebration of Nearly Headless Nick's 500th deathday (Halloween 1492). This would make Harry et.al. about 24/25 at the time of Code Ragnarok (May 2004).

Anyway, if you're interested in diving in, feel free to do so!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heirs' Legacy" from DieselDriver
Review:
deleted because I misread the chapter. Thinking you meant to type 25 percent rather than 25 present.
Comments from author:
Yep, you're absolutely right. It's been corrected. Thanks for pointing that out. ;-)
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from Dragonwolftiger
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Cool, nice to see another group. If you read the 'To Invade Hell' sections you will see the 'replicator' synths do somewhat the same thing.
Comments from author:
I think I will write my little bit then read the rest to make sure I'm not stepping on toes, then change as needed. I'm only on chapter 19 of Battlefront. May take awhile lol.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from DarthTenebrus
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Hmmm, overkill..

Reply: Sorry, I only meant overkill in the sense that there are so many combatants on the Allied side now that nobody can possibly keep track of it all. It's starting to get a bit confusing now, even if confusion is part and parcel of the nature of war. That's how many Allied forces now against how many different forces on the side of the demons?

To HMM -- would it be possible to relegate the T-1000s to a covert ops role? Given the capabilities of the mimetic polyalloy construction, it would seem obvious that the T-1000 would be in essence a multirole weapons platform capable of a wide variety of mission profiles. To not make use of that capability would be less than wise, in my view...but of course, it's his chapter, not mine...
Comments from author:
If I wanted overkill I would brought in a battalion of these guys armed with those fancy ray guns they have.:)

Reply: No worries. I do have some ideas but we will see if they are still usable once I catch up reading the rest of Battlefront.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [25 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from Harry
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*VBEG* I think that Sam is going to have FUN with her new toys! Time to LOCK AND LOAD, ROCK AND ROLL!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from Rich
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This could work out well. The T-1000 would be immune to a lot of spells, is almost indestructible, and uses the kind of weapons that are most effective against demons. The only problem I see is programming them to distinguish between legitimate and prohibited targets.
Review By [Rich] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from SamDragon
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Demon smashes terminator, terminator reforms, demon slices, reform, eats, reform. It is going to drive them nuts. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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