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Code Ragnarok: Stand and Be Counted

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Review of chapter "Slayers, Mages and Demons. Oh, my...!, part I" from HMaxMarius
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Very nice. While I'm not familiar with the cross, I do like the look into how the Code Ragnarok is impacting Scoobies in a parallel dimension. I'm looking forward to the next installment and will be adding your name to the 'Battlefront' list.

One thing I will point out. There are a fair number of grammatical errors due to improper tenses on some of the words 'felt' when you meant 'feel' and the like. The words are spelled correctly, so a spell checker won't catch them. You may want to make a proofreading pass through the story or acquire a beta reader to catch those things for you.

Anywho, keep up the great work on the story!
Comments from author:
Thank you, and sorry for the errors. I realize that I wrote it too quickly, as I'm usually quite a bit more thorough in proofreading. And as I noted to Harry below, the franchise tvtropes page is a good place to start (if I had more time I would add one of Code Ragnarok to that site)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayers, Mages and Demons. Oh, my...!, part I" from Rich
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Welcome Aboard !
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Rich] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayers, Mages and Demons. Oh, my...!, part I" from Harry
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We can use all the Mystical as well as non Mystical help we can get! But I want to know more about these people before they get the green light to engage in Ragnarok!
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Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from Angelchan
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Good chapter...
Review By [Angelchan] • Date [16 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stand and Be Counted" from ChaosLady
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I haven't read all the chapters yet, but not being familiar with all the worlds shown I was looking for something I knew well. I saw the universe that has Harry Potter as a military leader in the Star Wars universe, but is there a chapter that crosses over directly with the Harry Potter universe? If so, which one is it?
Comments from author:
Lead Author Comment: At this point there is not a specific Harry Potter sole-cross story. However, if you are interested in writing one, you would be very welcome to join the fray.

I toyed with the idea of doing one myself but my muse didn't have enough motivation to do it justice. I would have done it using the canon book timeline with year one being 1991 and year seven being 1998 based on the year two celebration of Nearly Headless Nick's 500th deathday (Halloween 1492). This would make Harry et.al. about 24/25 at the time of Code Ragnarok (May 2004).

Anyway, if you're interested in diving in, feel free to do so!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heirs' Legacy" from DieselDriver
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deleted because I misread the chapter. Thinking you meant to type 25 percent rather than 25 present.
Comments from author:
Yep, you're absolutely right. It's been corrected. Thanks for pointing that out. ;-)
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from Dragonwolftiger
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Cool, nice to see another group. If you read the 'To Invade Hell' sections you will see the 'replicator' synths do somewhat the same thing.
Comments from author:
I think I will write my little bit then read the rest to make sure I'm not stepping on toes, then change as needed. I'm only on chapter 19 of Battlefront. May take awhile lol.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from DarthTenebrus
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Hmmm, overkill..

Reply: Sorry, I only meant overkill in the sense that there are so many combatants on the Allied side now that nobody can possibly keep track of it all. It's starting to get a bit confusing now, even if confusion is part and parcel of the nature of war. That's how many Allied forces now against how many different forces on the side of the demons?

To HMM -- would it be possible to relegate the T-1000s to a covert ops role? Given the capabilities of the mimetic polyalloy construction, it would seem obvious that the T-1000 would be in essence a multirole weapons platform capable of a wide variety of mission profiles. To not make use of that capability would be less than wise, in my view...but of course, it's his chapter, not mine...
Comments from author:
If I wanted overkill I would brought in a battalion of these guys armed with those fancy ray guns they have.:)

Reply: No worries. I do have some ideas but we will see if they are still usable once I catch up reading the rest of Battlefront.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [25 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from Harry
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*VBEG* I think that Sam is going to have FUN with her new toys! Time to LOCK AND LOAD, ROCK AND ROLL!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from Rich
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This could work out well. The T-1000 would be immune to a lot of spells, is almost indestructible, and uses the kind of weapons that are most effective against demons. The only problem I see is programming them to distinguish between legitimate and prohibited targets.
Review By [Rich] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from SamDragon
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Demon smashes terminator, terminator reforms, demon slices, reform, eats, reform. It is going to drive them nuts. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To terminate or not to terminate..." from HMaxMarius
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Oh, I don't know about that DT... I'm sure there's something mystical that would have a delterious effect on these guys... on the other hand, having a friendly, technological version of Polgara Demons fighting on our side...

Then again, Sam would be very wary of these guys after her run-ins with the replicators.

kdakmmt, I've added you to Battlefront. General O'Neill feels that your forces could serve well on the South-West quadrant. Demons have been pushing through the weakened defenses in that sector threatening to break out toward the Dayton area...
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [25 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Roll Out!" from AlphaBeta
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Another nice addition!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Roll Out!" from DarthTenebrus
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Optimus Prime's mentor, the traitor Sentinel, before he turned taught Optimus that freedom is the right of all sentient beings. So it should be no great surprise when the Autobots find out that generally does not include demons as a rule.

Edit/Reply: I think demons even rate even lower as a rule than Decepticons. For one thing, in the DotM novelization, Optimus actually spares Megatron and tells him that he'd better watch his back if he's truly sincere about being tired of all the fighting and genuinely wishes to build something for once. For another, Optimus will soon discover that there are some genuinely benign demonic species who just wish to be left alone in peace, and the Hellmouth and the more...aggressive...types simply will not have it. They'll be the type to try and flee or stand with the forces of Earth and Cybertron...how's that for a plot device? I mean, you have to figure that in since Buffyverse canon provides at least two examples of benign demons in Doyle and Clem.

Oh yeah, Decepticons are sentient beings right along with Autobots, since they are also Cybertronian. The Allspark created them the same as the Autobots before their schism, so it's no wonder some of the 'Cons went renegade after the events of DotM.
Comments from author:
Yeah, demons rate on about the same level as Decepticons for Prime: scrap-to-be.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [22 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Roll Out!" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Very nice start Doc! You've been added to 'Battlefront'.

Glad Harry convinced you to join in.
Comments from author:
Thanks, so am I. Things are going to get very interesting. Just one question: what's the maximum size of the demons? i think i may have brought overkill with Omega Supreme. XD
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
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