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The Quiet Girl

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Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from Rich
Review:
This has many nice touches; my personal favorite is the dogs' refusing to track Buffy, but there are others. An excellent job.
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [Rich] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good "another world" version of Buffy. If this world has watchers they would not like that she wasn't council trained and the watcher that they assigned her died. I Think it is particularly interesting that in this world her incident didn't happen until she was a high school senior, meaning that she had extra years to either be vapid and Cordelia-like, or something we don't know about prior to her calling may have given her some small amount of character beyond that of a high school cheerleader, ice-skater or gymnast.
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from Lyssippe
Review:
This is very good. I like watching nightwing's discovery of Buffy, and letting the AU changes and similarities to the timeline surprise us through his discovery. I wonder wether there will be a sequel? Thank you for the enjoyable read.
Comments from author:
no sequel planned. Thanks!
Review By [Lyssippe] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from thewrongalice
Review:
Thanks, enjoyed this! I just have to check - did Dick's name ( well fake security guard's name) change a couple of times? Ignore me if I'm imagining it - it's been a long day with a dirth of caffeine... good story though!

32 hours? You deserve a medal! I tend to get a little weird after 24. Umm also sorry 3rd paragraph from the top you've got Toby and Alex and toward the end you've got Anthony - but I'm pretty sure it's Slater the whole way through! Which I figure you deserve chocolate chip cookies for...
Comments from author:
Just...ummm...once that I found . woops!

I've been awake for 32 hours. I blame the hallucinations.

Fixed and thank you!
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from Matron
Review:
Very nice will you make a sequel? And go Buffy, be free.
Comments from author:
Grumpy cat

No
Review By [Matron] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from brokenmimir
Review:
Awesome story -- interesting and thought provoking. I can imagine a hundred direction this would go next, each of them more interesting than the last. Superlative, and a story that begs for a hundred more questions to be answered.

I would also like to point out, that in the DC comicsverse, vampires do exist, but aren't well known. Traditionally, they burned up very quickly under direct sunlight, and were nearly universally evil. Frankly, they fit pretty well with Buffyverse style vamps.
Comments from author:
I think you said you liked it.

thanks!
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from deathgeonous
Review:
Interesting fic. And this is actually one of the few one shots that I've read that actually work as a one shot. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from Feygan
Review:
I really enjoyed that. Thank you.

Now I need to go find another story in that vein.
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Review By [Feygan] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from Gideon
Review:
I'm glad to see that Buffy has remembered that she has a purpose, that she is able to help people. Did Dick help her escape or is she really that good? If so, why did she wait so long? The mystery is really thought provoking.
Comments from author:
Dick didn't help her - even though its written in third person its from his point of view. we only know what he knows.

that's also why we don't know what caused her to escape.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from Cutiepie
Review:
What made her leave after so long? Was she only waiting for a chance to escape without anyone else being able to escape with her? That is the only thing that makes sense to me. Quite thought-provoking. Any chance of a second part?
Comments from author:
One off, sorry.

thanks!
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Quiet Girl" from DrDamage
Review:
This is a well written, compelling story. I'd prefer the story made clear the reason the quiet girl decides she's been in an asylum for long enough and why she chose not to leave earlier.
Comments from author:
even though the story is written in third person, its written from Dick's point of view. We only know what he knows, and he doesn't know why she stays or why she leaves.

A little not knowing is healthy, I think.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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