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Review of chapter "Part 11 Blessed by Murphy" from Cmiller
Review:
Oh snap!!!
Comments from author:
:) glad you like it lol
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Murphy loves us" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
interesting fic so far! Can't wait to read more :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2 Shock" from AntonioCC
Review:
Not bad, but the wall-of-text style paragraphs make it difficult to read. Also, when some character is thinking could you separate it from the paragraphs, it makes the story looks a bit neater.
Comments from author:
Sorry TTHM format drives me nuts, I have to work to make it fit. But hey its fun to try sorry its distracting I will try to do better.
Review By [AntonioCC] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Murphy loves us" from AllenPitt
Review:
When Faith finds out about her family relationships in this case, things are going to get tense. So, we have a rogue (watcher?) out to 'restore' the slayer line, and a 300+ year old vampire with his own agenda. And this guy is no Angel.....
I sure hope the various cops are understanding, taking a cop's gun away is kind of extremely illegal....
Comments from author:
Yep but at lest they are still breathing. I mean guns and willow are so not mixy as they say. I think it was a reasonable action with minimal violence. Which given the possible reactions of willow was the best that could be hoped for. Rouge watcher more like one who stepped away or was fired when he did not tow quientins lines. One who had the resourses not to care about the council's games. The vampire he kind of snuck up in there not sure what I am going to be doing with Luke.

Fire
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10 Murphy loves us" from Cmiller
Review:
Ah... Murphy how you love us.

More please.
Comments from author:
yep he does lol. Only the Scooby gang lol
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5 Calls for help" from AllenPitt
Review:
I think you meant "tenacious", not "tenuous" (minor quibble). Should be fun once Faith's parentage comes to light...
Comments from author:
Thanks I fixed it.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5 Calls for help" from Cmiller
Review:
more please.
Comments from author:
three more chapters are poted
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 4" from Cmiller
Review:
whoa!!! More please.
Comments from author:
I am working on it. Please be patient. I will do the best I can. I will also try to answer the reviews. If I miss one please forgive me. I will try to address them all in due time.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from Cmiller
Review:
So Daddy Isles is a former Watcher? Faith knows of Paddy Doyle just not her possible connection to him? Still waiting for the clash of BPD, Slayers, and Doyle's crew.

More please.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2 Shock" from kdakmmt
Review:
never watched the show myself but what youre doing with it seems interesting.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I love the show a lot. I can see the pairing as friend or as partners. The show tends to have the friendship angle which is really fun to watch. A lot of fan fiction however tends to pair them as partners/lovers which works surprisingly well. Its generally not my type of read but the authors I have read make it compelling enough and the stories deep enough to read f/f pairings for me. I liked the challenge and the cross so I am giving it a go. Thanks for the review.
Review By [kdakmmt] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2 Shock" from Cmiller
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Uh-oh is Faith not looking forward to going home where Daddy dearest is? Does Faith know that Doyle is her dad? Can Faith kick Caitlin's ass a little? Do the other ladies in the power house group know why Faith wouldn't be too thrilled going back to Boston? When will the clash of the BPD and Council happen? Also why don't you have Faith(if she knows Doyle is her daddy) think about needing to have a chat with daddy dearest.

More please.
Comments from author:
No Faith does not know Doyle is her father. She was raised by her aunt who she believed was her mother. Her watcher was killed in Boston plus she has a lot of bad memories of the city because of a very bad childhood. As to clashes we will see what happens. I can see it becoming interesting at the very least.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One Rituals" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Pretty decent start. I LOVE Rizzoli & Isles.

IIRC, R/I is part of the challenge, but I do dislike slash (of either sex) on any case but canon slash I can take. Why do authors/fans insist on slashing friends?
Comments from author:
I admit not being the greatest fan of slash generally speaking. However cannon slash I can deal with. R and I fit the profile of potential partners. I have read a lot of great works with them as lovers of late and actually like the pairing as friends or lovers. I can see it going either way now. I do love Willow and Tara and can deal with Willow Kennedy in the right context. I think I will use it here as Willow will need a supporting partner and I cannot think of way to bring Oz in at least not at first and the challenge asks for the match. It will likely not be overt. I deal far better with innuendo as I am definitely het in nature. But I not condemning anyone choices either. I may or may not pair up the others with R and I characters though it might be funny to see some match ups. Frost and Faith be a trip I think though Tommy be more of a match and Frankie might just be a way for Buffy to connect to a human male. We will see. I am glad you gave it a read though.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One Rituals" from Cmiller
Review:
huh? Is Faith Paddy Doyle's as well? Or what?

More please.
Comments from author:
Yeah its just to good of a thing to pass up. I think she needs a decent relative and Maura a great one I think. Besides I kind of like the idea of Faith ripping into Hope and Caylin for treating Maura so badly. Love the idea of them making up but only after they get a beat down if only in words. Besides Paddy deserves a chance at redemption and I think the council might give him one lol.
Well thanks for the review. I have to admit I love R and I and the crossover is just to good of a challenge to pass up. I hope I do it well enough to make the issuer happy.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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