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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from tavinseven
Review:
I really like this story. It is confusing but you are linking all of the fandoms really well, and I can't wait to see how xander reacts to his new parents. Please update soon.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from bousquem
Review:
This story is great, though I've taken to try and diagraming who is related to who and how otherwise I can't keep track of it. I can't wait for the next chapter to see how even more of the people get pulled in and how Xander, Faith, and the others is going to react to being adopted.
Review By [bousquem] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from heavyneos
Review:
love this please keep going :)
Review By [heavyneos] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from WolfWriter
Review:
And Sigyn can smack Loki for not telling Alexander that he had been adopted!!! And then Hel can join in the fun.

Heck, I bet that Jormungand and Fenrir will join in just for the sheer heck of it. Fenrir can pee on his dad's leg, and Jormungand can breathe icky snake breath in his dad's face.

This was excellent, but it might be a smidge difficult to keep all of the fandom genres in place.

SG: 1.

The Avengers.

Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

Who's next, Harry Potter and friends?

Doctor Who? (I can totally see that happening, the man is attracted to trouble the way that bees are attracted to flowers.)
Comments from author:
Well if I was feeling eeeeevilll I could add in Big Bang Theory easily. The actress that played Faith played an FBI agent in BBT plus...Winifred er Fred is from Texas.....I could give her a cousin...named Sheldon...... but don't know if I want to do that yet.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from tavinseven
Review:
This is good and funny. I like how you are connecting all of the different groups. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [5 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Dhampyr
Review:
You know, I'm not sure how Faith will react to Cousin Maria and Natasha showing up. Assuming it is Natasha and not Cap, of course. I mean, on one hand I could see Faith liking and respecting someone with Black Widow's skill set. On the other hand, Natasha and Maria showed up just in time to interrupt prime nookie. Faith might be... grumpy at that prospect.
Comments from author:
Cap, Clint and Banner are headed to the mountain. Two visitors from ...'elsewhere' are going to visit Xander and Faith in Cleveland and...you get to meet Tony Harris's and Phil Coulson's dad as well as Fury's son.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from AnFan
Review:
Have you decided on a reason all of these relationships are popping up at this point in the story? It sounds like there is a cascade effect going on that should have started with an event. Otherwise, I would imagine that Xander would have had more interactions with family other that Rory when growing up.

How far can the cascade travel :D

This doesn't seem like an action/adventure driven story or plot, more like a case of: lets break the Six degrees of separation theory by connecting everything in multiple crossovers directly through the main characters. :)

You could throw a few more crossovers in, like NCIS or a police or forensics show.

Do you have any plans for after you've pointed out the connections? When the dominoes stop falling, will the story change to a case of Xander and Faith being troubleshooters who move from series to series fixing canon to remove apocálypsis from their separate plots?

So far, a funny story. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Genuka
Review:
Maria? that's one I don't know... Otherwise nice weaving.
Comments from author:
Maria Hill. I believe she was Fury's second in command in the Avengers movie.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from IronOx
Review:
This is fun. Mildly insane, but definitely fun. Good thing Faith and Xander did have a small, private wedding, the seating chart for a large one would have been "interesting". I absolutely LOVE the take on Loki.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
Are you mixing two or more separate timelines together, or are am I reading it wrong, or are you having Faith's father be Tony Stark, meanwhile his grandfather is Senator Kinsey? If so, does Tony know who his "father in law" is? And does Kinsey know about Tony?

Whether or not Tony ever married Faith's mother, Kinsey's daughter is another matter. At least one fic has Faith be Tony's daughter, conceived during a "wild weekend" where he may never have known the girl's name or that she got pregnant until years or decades later.....
Comments from author:
Basically. Tony was in college. I figure MIT.It was his graduation party. Faith's mother was living there at the time. She went to said party. Nine months later a little bundle of joy called Faith. Tony never knew till after Kakitos killed Faith's mother. A lawyer gave him her last letter and Tony spent some time looking for his daughter. At the same time Senator Kinsey got a letter from his estranged daughter.....

Thus the blow up tween Faith and Tony , while she was in prison.

Kinsey knows that Tony knocked his precious, if estranged, little girl up. He also would love to discuss that matter with him with a baseball bat. Tony has no clue the Kinsey is his father in law. The idea would horrify him but....

This is all I'm showing of Faith's family. Does Kinsey's other children know about Faith? Maybe maybe not. There is another reason Kinsey is 'easy' on the new council. He is keeping an eye out for his baby girl's baby girl. Sure he is a power hungry, back stabbing , son of a bitch BUT he will take care of his family and Faith is family....it's also good fortune on Xander's part that he married Faith.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
*MY PRECIOUS*

XD
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [8 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Dhampyr
Review:
Loki officiated their Marriage under Asgardian Law. Why do I get the feeling he's a personal patron for Xander or Faith? And that Fury and Hill are well aware of that fact? Probably Natasha too.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [8 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from randomguy
Review:
Fun fic overall but I spit water on my desk from the "behind me" line at the end.
Review By [randomguy] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
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