Review of chapter "First Meeting" from breve
I'm excited that I found this, and CAN'T WAIT to continue reading.
Just taking a mini break to tell you what a great start it is :)
Review By [breve
] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from Olympus
OH. MY. GOD.
Freaking EPIC story:) This has to be one of the best Stargate fics out there. It's one of those stories that you can read over and over again and not get tired of it ... damn near perfect.
The only real thing that I found, er a little bit inaccurate is Jack not bringing a gun to the demon confrontation - although it worked fine the way that you did it, it still would have made more sense for him to bring a gun - spec ops trained as he is.
And I really liked the way that Jack and the others reacted to magic and demons being real - spot on. Had to laugh at their *textbook* responses. :P
But anyway ... so yeah, bloody amazing. Great work:)
Review By [Olympus
] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from Angelform
An excellent story. Good concept, well implemented. The plot works and the characterisation is decent.
However I do have a few of complaints:
I understand these two were done so the plot would flow as it did but they are still annoying.
Jack reacting ‘magic is impossible and you are crazy/lying’ is utterly out of character for someone who has spent years going through the Stargate. His reaction would have been ‘there is advanced/alien tech on earth that we missed’.
The ZPM being running off magic. While I have nothing wrong with the Ancients knowing magic (in fact I have more of a problem with the Asgard Not knowing about it) but having the ZPM drain magic from a world contradicts pretty much everything about them. Not merely the techno-babble but the canon of how they work. Particularly the 1) running for thousands of years 2) them working in space and 3) having dozens working at once.
On a less plot relevant note is Jack not taking a gun when he knew his son was in trouble. It would have been no problem to transport the thing, not for a US Air force Officer, and would have been far more effective against anything short of an actual god.
Review By [Angelform
] • Date [25 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from AtotheM
Really enjoyable read! Loved how Jack was able to fill in a hole in Xander's life. You really got all of the various modes of banter down, too. Great job! :)
Review By [AtotheM
] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from Callista
Review By [Callista
] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from SEAborg
Rather enjoyable story. Well-written throughout, but the last chapter was particularly enjoyable. I can just imagine that dog getting fawned over by dozens of slayers. :)
Review By [SEAborg
] • Date [28 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from foolartist
A perfect story. I especially admire how they both kept thir secrets. So often in fanfic it's just blurted out at the drop of a hat. The realationship had a wonderful buildup.
Review By [foolartist
] • Date [10 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twelve Little Monkeys Hoppin on the Bed" from skabs
love the story, just re-reading because it's awesome! thought you'd like to know though that during an episode, in which the sgc has to work with a documentary crew, jack states that his favorite color is peridot, not blue. also, if he could have dinner with anyone in the world it would be mary steenburgen.
Review By [skabs
] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from EasterCat
Loved this story. It was enjoyable and entertaining.
Review By [EasterCat
] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from lucidity
I love this story. Thanks for sharing it:)
Review By [lucidity
] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from serenityselena
wonderful story ....
loved reading it ^__^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from ShadesofGray
Excellent story! I really enjoyed it.
Review By [ShadesofGray
] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from bucksavage
BRAVO! A fine ending to a really well done piece of fanfiction. The puppy thing was a nice touch...the choice of dog was cool too....a good match to Xander, quite literally.
Review By [bucksavage
] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fifteen Thousand Miles From Earth" from bucksavage
That was hilarious! Thor giving Xander and autograph, and asking Xander for his?! AWESOME! The end of the chapter as well, I must say, was pretty nice.
Review By [bucksavage
] • Date [9 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen Gazillion To Go" from bucksavage
I liked your way of explaining the magical drain as the power supply for the Ancient Control chair and drone in Antarctica.
The end of the chapter was really nice...it can be hard to have one character to play off the other like that when the other has no action or speech at all, but you pulled it off. It reveals a lot of what kind of man Xander really is more than anything else.
Review By [bucksavage
] • Date [2 Jan 11] • Not Rated